Her

Her

A Story by Clifford

She sat by the window, looking out. She was the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. Her eyes are endlessly deep. Her smile lights up the room. Her tears made the whole world stop. She is admired by everyone. Her heart is pure and her laughter is bright and contagious.
From the moment I first saw her, I've been madly, head over heels in love. I adore everything about her, from her soothing talking voice to her annoying habits. I love her even when I hate her. She's completely and utterly too good for me.
She is my wife.

© 2017 Clifford



Author's Note

Clifford
Purely fictitious, of course. I'm just continuing in my theme of writing short, simple stories. Trying to keep the gears turning. I appreciate any feedback.

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Clifford, you are the man I suspected you were by your other writings. I absolutely adore men who publicly and without embarrassment or fear adore their wives. I know your Author's Note says "fictitious", but anyone who can write that can feel it.

"head over heals" Heels? Unless you meant that she heals your soul with her love... *ahem* Getting smarmy, now, so I'll stop.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

2 Months Ago

Haha, thanks for that catch. And thank you for your comments. Always very much appreciated.



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Clifford, you are the man I suspected you were by your other writings. I absolutely adore men who publicly and without embarrassment or fear adore their wives. I know your Author's Note says "fictitious", but anyone who can write that can feel it.

"head over heals" Heels? Unless you meant that she heals your soul with her love... *ahem* Getting smarmy, now, so I'll stop.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

2 Months Ago

Haha, thanks for that catch. And thank you for your comments. Always very much appreciated.
This is really nicely short and fresh. Like haiku in short story form. End is wonderful and funny. Words make nice picture in my head. So we'll done dear writer.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

2 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts. Appreciate it.
WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

2 Months Ago

You welcome I really enjoyed.
This was a sweet devotion.
Capturing the beauty of someone through our eyes, shows the world just how much we love someone by our outward description of them.
I liked this.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

3 Months Ago

Thanks again for leaving your thoughts. It's always great to hear what others think. I'll be sure to.. read more
Novel Minded_75

3 Months Ago

Always welcome and thank you for your time in reviewing my work also.

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