Time (acrostic)

Time (acrostic)

A Poem by Clifford

Ticking away

Imaginary concept

Making us behave like fools

Everyone eventually runs out

© 2017 Clifford



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Imaginary concept.......so many debates have been conducted over the true existence of time! It is a fascinating discussion with merits on both sides.

We are indeed slaves in a way to Time; living our lives to its ticks and tocks until we tick no more.

These smaller writes have their own level of difficulty I have found since the need for clear and concise meaning must be outlined in just a few lines, and your piece does that very well here. So kudos for this one, Clifford.



Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

4 Months Ago

I think you put more effort into your review than I did into the poem! It's true how we're slaves to.. read more



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Nice little acrostic Clifford. :) One of those unfortunate truths that we don't like to think about too often.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Clifford

2 Months Ago

Agreed! Time sure sucks, huh? The ticking of the clock is always in our ears. Thanks for reading, An.. read more
time is of the essence and valued. thanks for sharing the lovely poem.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Clifford

2 Months Ago

Thank you, Roxane.
As though someone is behind us yelling go! go! go! Time pushes, pesters, runs out when we need it most. Then, in the end, the biggest insult of all...It takes us out of the picture altogether.

Perhaps in the next life, we'll no longer need the scoundrel. :)

Nice one Clifford.



Posted 2 Months Ago


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Clifford

2 Months Ago

I love that first line of your review. It certainly does feel like that at times. Yes indeed, hopefu.. read more
Great acrostic with lines of pure truth. Very clever. Loved it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Clifford

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Annette. Much appreciated.
Annette Pisano Higley

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome Clifford!
we all run out of time eventually...and we all act like fools eventually...

i think the worst thing we do is use our time foolishly...

smart words here.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Clifford

2 Months Ago

I agree with you on the misuse of time. Thank you for reading, Jacob.
Funny how when we are young, the time seems to crawl by. We can't wait to grow up, do this or that. Then as we age, it seems to soar by. We want time to stop, longing for all the wasted hours. Thank you, Clifford.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Clifford

2 Months Ago

I may still be young, but I'm starting to understand what people say about time soaring by. Thank yo.. read more
Ouch! This is so abrupt & direct, almost like getting hit with your message! *smile* This reminds me of the old "Chicago" song: Does anybody really know what time it is? So true, every line here! Sometimes there's just nothing left to add! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Clifford

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much! I've always had a hard time wrapping my head around the concept of time and fin.. read more
I really like the meaning. So much of the things that stress us in society are based on our artificial concept of time.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Clifford

3 Months Ago

Long time no see, Hannah! True words, and thank you for reading.
Time is definitely a strange thing, it just keeps going. Whereas we, as you cleverly suggest 'eventually run out'. I think our 'mortality' does sometimes make us behave like fools. I like this shor thoughtful poem.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Clifford

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Every line is spot on. That time makes us behave like fools? In today's world, truer words have never been said quite that straight up. I dream of a time when I can wake up...when I wake up. Go somewhere...or not. I needed this today to remind me that more of my time belongs to me than I generally acknowledge. Thank you.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Clifford

4 Months Ago

It is very easy to loose ourselves to the "cycle" of time. Thank YOU for reading and leaving your th.. read more

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