Time

Time

A Poem by Clifford

Ticking away

Imaginary concept

Making us behave like fools

Everyone eventually runs out

© 2017 Clifford



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Imaginary concept.......so many debates have been conducted over the true existence of time! It is a fascinating discussion with merits on both sides.

We are indeed slaves in a way to Time; living our lives to its ticks and tocks until we tick no more.

These smaller writes have their own level of difficulty I have found since the need for clear and concise meaning must be outlined in just a few lines, and your piece does that very well here. So kudos for this one, Clifford.



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Clifford

1 Month Ago

I think you put more effort into your review than I did into the poem! It's true how we're slaves to.. read more



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Ouch! This is so abrupt & direct, almost like getting hit with your message! *smile* This reminds me of the old "Chicago" song: Does anybody really know what time it is? So true, every line here! Sometimes there's just nothing left to add! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Clifford

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much! I've always had a hard time wrapping my head around the concept of time and fin.. read more
I really like the meaning. So much of the things that stress us in society are based on our artificial concept of time.

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Clifford

2 Weeks Ago

Long time no see, Hannah! True words, and thank you for reading.
Time is definitely a strange thing, it just keeps going. Whereas we, as you cleverly suggest 'eventually run out'. I think our 'mortality' does sometimes make us behave like fools. I like this shor thoughtful poem.

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Clifford

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Every line is spot on. That time makes us behave like fools? In today's world, truer words have never been said quite that straight up. I dream of a time when I can wake up...when I wake up. Go somewhere...or not. I needed this today to remind me that more of my time belongs to me than I generally acknowledge. Thank you.

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Clifford

1 Month Ago

It is very easy to loose ourselves to the "cycle" of time. Thank YOU for reading and leaving your th.. read more
Imaginary concept.......so many debates have been conducted over the true existence of time! It is a fascinating discussion with merits on both sides.

We are indeed slaves in a way to Time; living our lives to its ticks and tocks until we tick no more.

These smaller writes have their own level of difficulty I have found since the need for clear and concise meaning must be outlined in just a few lines, and your piece does that very well here. So kudos for this one, Clifford.



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

1 Month Ago

I think you put more effort into your review than I did into the poem! It's true how we're slaves to.. read more

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