Season's Greeting

Season's Greeting

A Poem by Clifford

No longer do we have bright summer rays.
We don't feel the comfort of warm summer days.
The birds don't sing their cheerful songs.
The nights are becoming long.

Temperatures rapidly plummet,
Intense, chill winds will buffet.
White flakes flying through the sky
making the air rather dry.

© 2017 Clifford



Author's Note

Clifford
Not a very serious attempt at poetry, though thoughts/suggestions are still welcome.

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I know to most people that’s kind of a sad thing but I just love it ! Personally I feel so happy when winter comes. I’d just get away with summer and have a year long winter !
... I know I’m a bit different from most people out there :/

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

4 Days Ago

I know this poem didn't paint winter in the most positive light, but I do really like winter. The au.. read more



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I know to most people that’s kind of a sad thing but I just love it ! Personally I feel so happy when winter comes. I’d just get away with summer and have a year long winter !
... I know I’m a bit different from most people out there :/

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

4 Days Ago

I know this poem didn't paint winter in the most positive light, but I do really like winter. The au.. read more
Not very serious but still rhymes and makes sense. Two things which I personally enjoy in poetry. :) I liked this poem Clifford. It made me smile and feel a little bit smug that in the other hemisphere we're coming into summer! :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

2 Weeks Ago

As a self-centered American, I forget that the entire world doesn't have the same seasonal cycle. It.. read more
Sounds good to me, Clifford.

Simple, flowing and on point. Sometimes these simple poems are excellent to get the poetic touch back.

Nice work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Doodley. Very true.
I was really enjoying it until I got to "making the southerners vomit.". Could you come up with something else ?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clifford

3 Weeks Ago

I agree. Not a fan of that line. I'm not very savy with rhymes. I'll try coming up with something be.. read more
Clifford

3 Weeks Ago

Hopefully that's better. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Wendy Seames Garner

3 Weeks Ago

Much better!

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