Fight Me

Fight Me

A Poem by ClosedEyesOpen
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Again just writing.

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I smash you're face in

Loving the pain that shoots its way up my arm into my shoulder

Sending waves of pleasure to my brain

Making my mind go blank

Body moves on its own

Not knowing where we are going

Just hanging on for the ride

A ride never forgotten

But barely remembered

 

You're fist connects with my chest

Knocking me off balance

Another burst of pain

Another reminder that im actually alive

 

My left foot comes up swiftly

Barely seen

You're right side of you're ribs cave in

You dont hesitate

 

Grip of steel

You hold my ankle mid air

Flipping me on the floor

Hitting hard

I hear a crack

 

Hop back up swinging

Few kicks to the face, given

Few more punches to the chest, taken

This fight will never stop

Because when you're fighting yourself

Its a never ending game of cat and cat

And in the end...

 

Destruction is inevitable.

© 2011 ClosedEyesOpen


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i think the twist at the end was great,
a battle against yourself!
we all have those :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No one ever wins when fighting, especially when it is with yourself. A very interesting description of the inner battle of heart and mind.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Ashley, I am 17 years young. I love to horseback ride and I often write to get my emotions out in the open. I'm a nice person once you get to know me but if you give me a hard time i'll giv.. more..

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