Joblessness

Jobless person that I am,
Though I've things to do in time.
I wish to explore the world around.

There's much more than being an Einstein.

Math, Science and Social,

All seem just fine,

But a tinge of art and creative smart

Proves to be sublime.

Jobless person that I am.

I love to while away time.

My joblessness is surely revealed

In this stupid poem of mine! :P 

Reviews

[william keepers]

Your joblessness may be revealed, but I fail to see the stupidity of this poem other then a device of self-imposed sarcastic humour! I was jobless for a long stretch and even now my time working is very small. I too "love to while away time" yet with the abundance I have, I still desire more! How's that for stupid?
I like how you say "a tinge of art and creative art Proves to be sublime". Does not the sublime somehow transcend time? Very deep and meaningful Marina, thanks for writing it!

[Marina]

Thanks for reviewing :)