Fairytale

Fairytale

A Poem by Saturnalia
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We never had a fairytale.

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No flame matches the fire

That surfaces, hot from the ire.

It’s your eyes that tell the story

Of us through the wire.

 

‘Once upon a time’

It stated, as if a rhyme.

But there was not going to be

‘Happily ever after’ this time.

 

‘This is your fault.’

Your lies seal me into a vault.

‘It was never a fairytale.’

The cliché came to a halt.

© 2008 Saturnalia


Author's Note

Saturnalia
Just something to pass the time. Not really caring about it.

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Very nice poem! I like the rhythm, and the rhyme makes it very special. A nice statement you're making ^^
Keep up the good work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like it. it's a sweet piece. and you manage to create a rare rhyming poem that doesn't seem like doctor suiss from hell. it flows well and never feels trite and cliche or even forced.
witty and unique.

well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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