His Harmony

His Harmony

A Poem by Cobblestone Traveler
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And she knows it. Inspired by the November 10 Words I Give Contest.

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They swoon as you finish your rendition
It really was a stellar performance
The radical fangirls all scream in unison
As their biggest crush exits the stage

To think you went from garage to glory
Carrying the tradition of artistic blood
Now the catalyst of teen starvation
As well as heart flutters and salivation

As you hand the backstage assistant 
Your golden orange-burst Gibson
You lock your fervent eyes with mine
And make your way towards me  

You smile as you notice I'm wearing
The clear prism necklace you gave me
You trace it as you claim my lips
And I can't help but give a chuckle

Those girls would really hate me
They would turn all shades of green
From shamrock to the darkest seaweed
If they knew where we were headed

© 2016 Cobblestone Traveler


Author's Note

Cobblestone Traveler
These were the 10 words I was given:

Starvation
Radical
Orange
Crush
Seaweed
Garage
Stellar
Rendition
Prism
Tradition

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Congratulations! Very creative use of the words... It made me want to go to a concert....haven't been to one in a while.... :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

7 Years Ago

I appreciate it!
I really enjoyed this. Thank you for your creative entry into the 10 Words I Give contest. Hope to see you next round. I can totally relate to this piece! Kudos & Congratulations!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! It was a blast to write.
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Thats extremely creative by the way
i love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

7 Years Ago

Thank so much! I had fun experimenting.
Excellent poem. I enjoyed the story in it. Impressive writing and use of the words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

7 Years Ago

I thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Black Cat Fever

7 Years Ago

You're so welcome.

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