Blunt Brevity

Blunt Brevity

A Poem by Cobblestone Traveler
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It can be necessary

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Make your decision; is play still okay


Or should it be sole-crushed into the floor

Because I'm f*****g tired of finding myself

To be only making out with your front door


© 2017 Cobblestone Traveler



Author's Note

Cobblestone Traveler
Is it a bit ironic that the "I am not a robot" captcha for this was "flirter"?

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as much as I'm an advocate for freedom of speech, I feel that the expletive is a little too much here. Otherwise, superbly written, and witty in its brevity! Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cobblestone Traveler

6 Months Ago

I appreciate the feedback! On occasion I burst out little rage nuggets, haha. Thank you for reading!
emipoemi

6 Months Ago

my pleasure

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Added on May 10, 2017
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