Imagine

I am going to work with younger children, I love children so much <3

Who knows how one pair of eyes

Can hold so much soul, so much wonder

One can only ponder

How they have so much depth so young

An astounding imagination

You can see the Indiana Jones adventure

Or the princess in her tower, just looking into those eyes

Shining so bright, with hope and pleasure

So much in someone so small

A mind that bests any adult's 

Creative hands, make their own Van Gogh

Just through a glob of finger paint

Small hand inside yours

So fragile, yet so strong

The wonderment of being so young

The magic that's inside them

Look into a child's eyes

See everything you wish you still had

Author's Note

I'm not used to free write lol.

Reviews

[@zeewhykay]

I'm refreshed by this theme, instead of the usual high/low pieces. Even for myself it is hard to diverge from those strong emotions, but you nailed this pretty well and made it your own ! You enthralled me into the mind of a child. The day you stop dreaming is the day you got old. Well played. Cheers !

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you so much, I was trying to go for a taste of something new/positive :)

[Chris]

So many lose their innocence way too early and the shattered dreams fill too many lives.

[lily pennvellyn]

this is very beautiful, I usually like dark, violent poems, but this is so beautiful that you have to love it

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you so much, I'm glad it touched you :)

[Justin]

that is awesome, being creative is amazing!!!! :) :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love this.
"Who knows how one pair of eyes
Can hold so much soul, so much wonder

One can only ponder

How they have so much depth so young

An astounding imagination"

Pen on...:).................

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you so much!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[SierraT]

You can feel the innocence. So sweet, I love it :)

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thanks so much!

[The Nude Writer]

Awwwe how sweet :) I Love this :)

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you!!!

[seraphicAlisah]

Me either, not really into free verse poetry.
But with your piece, it's good.
I don't have the right to give any critiques or comments since I'm not that good or at least an expert.
Yet, you nailed it and wrote exactly your ideas about kids, the joy they bring to people. :)
Thanks for sharing.
-alisah

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you! :)

[LightforChrist]

This poem is so beautiful! It almost makes me want to cry, because it is so tender and sweet. Great job and keep writing! :)

[Bailey C. Writing]

Thank you SO much!