A Little Girl's Eulogy

A Little Girl's Eulogy

A Poem by William Liston
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Short piece

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Mommy, wake up

© 2016 William Liston


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Ahh this is heart wrenching, as my mom passed away in Feburary, of course, I was not a child, at the time, but an adult, yet still the fact that she is no longer physically present, brings pain and a sense of loss. In spite of much arguing and discontent, I know she loved me deep from within. And I loved her too. I am still learning to cope with her loss and yet at the same time I know she suffers no more.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

6 Years Ago

Maria, I'm glad you could feel the emotion in this piece, but I'm sorry for your loss. I was once to.. read more



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Sighhhhh, its amazing how just three little words can tell such a sad story ~ that has my heart hurting so bad right now.

I look forward to reading more of your work William, and if this poem is an example of the rest it shouldn't take too long.

Take care & have a blessed day.
~ hsg



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, heavenscentgirl : )
But no, most of my poems aren't this short.. read more
heavenscentgirl1

6 Years Ago

Yes, I know ~ I was just trying to lighten up the moment, for those 3 little words really tore me up.. read more
Day-um! Pretty close to "Jesus wept" and just as heartbreaking. Mr. Liston, this was startling in its brevity, and wondrous for its huge impact. Hmmph! Makes my heart hurt.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

6 Years Ago

I'm glad this brief effort could leave such an impact, Carol. Your words are greatly appreciated : )
Ahh this is heart wrenching, as my mom passed away in Feburary, of course, I was not a child, at the time, but an adult, yet still the fact that she is no longer physically present, brings pain and a sense of loss. In spite of much arguing and discontent, I know she loved me deep from within. And I loved her too. I am still learning to cope with her loss and yet at the same time I know she suffers no more.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

6 Years Ago

Maria, I'm glad you could feel the emotion in this piece, but I'm sorry for your loss. I was once to.. read more
Spooky! Although quite adequate within itself, it provokes a desire to write the girl a story. Unique. Good thought. I.I.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Isabella Ivy

7 Years Ago

You're most welcome! I.I.
Wow. Just wow! I think lordofmen pretty much summed it all up, but again, Wow. Just wow.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
I get it but its all about how one takes it in. So o guess by the tittle her mum is dead and she dies not understand that so she thinks she is just sleeping. It good for being three words. yours truely a mad lord

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

7 Years Ago

Thank you. That was what I was trying to convey.
I never thought three words would rip my heart out so hard. I love it. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

William Liston

7 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on August 29, 2016
Last Updated on August 29, 2016
Tags: death, mommy, sorrow

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William Liston
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Get your own valid XHTML YouTube embed code I'm an amateur poet who's been writing for about three and a half years. Some of my influences include Edgar Alla.. more..

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