The Fall

The Fall

A Poem by Colton Warr
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Fall

A Poem by Colton Warr


As a brown and crinkled leaf does

I fall to you

And as a hopeless romantic does

I give my all to you

As a young child does

I crawl to you

And as a lost soul does

I call to you

 

As this air turns from warm to cold

All I need is you to hold

As a broker in their prime

To you, my heart is sold

 

As these colors around me change

All I need is for you to breathe my name

As a million dollar song

To you, I owe my fame

 

As these holidays become more festive

All I need is your best, then best it

As a dream inside of my head

To you, I have invested

 

As these clouds begin to precipitate in the sky

All I need is you by my side

As an addict takes another dose

To me, you can give your eyes

 

As a brown and crinkled leaf does

I fall to you

And as a hopeless romantic does

I give my all to you

As a young child does

I crawl to you

And as a lost soul does

I call to you

 

My heart

Don’t tear it apart

About you since the start

So funny, beautiful, sexy and smart

I was so afraid to do this, so afraid to restart

So please take my hand, hold me tight, I don’t ever want you to depart

You’re the reason for this change in my weather

As the leaves do the summer, you’re the one I miss

Perhaps I am a leaf, how could I fall like this

If there are others, like a snake I will hiss

You are my intimacy, my kiss

I want to reminisce

My bliss

 

As a brown and crinkled leaf does

I fall to you

And as a hopeless romantic does

I give my all to you

As a young child does

I crawl to you

And as a lost soul does

I call to you

 


© 2014 Colton Warr



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Great flow to this piece! I like how the beginning circled its way into the end....a complete piece. Keep up the great work and lovely descriptions :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


This poem is mesmerizing. For one cannot stop, until every last word is read. I cannot tell you enough of how brilliant your poems are. I will work hard to rival your epic writer skills. For you are the new embodiment of pure talent and epicness. I will stay your fan, for one cannot leave such a great writer as you. I hope that the thoughts of stopping your writing career will never cross your mind because your writing must grow in this world of us.

Good job :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much, my friend! Your words are always pure inspiration and encouragement to my eyes .. read more
Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

No problem. I am glad that I can see your growth in the writers world and that you are so nice and f.. read more
Quality work from beginning to end. Lovely words shaped into a beautiful song. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Willard! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! I appreciate the kind words! Thank you .. read more
especially powerful with the last stanza and the first repeating...excellent writing...thank you

Posted 2 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! I appreciate the kind words! Thanks for stopping.. read more
Love this a lot! It really got me thinking, and it really conveyed different images with each line I read. Tfs :) x.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Kiana! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for stopping by and checking it .. read more
I love this. Such a soft read. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Natalie! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving it a read!
I think many people fall like a leaf, and then get raked up into a dumpster. Others put into a hot flame that they never want to crawl out of. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

That is beautiful, thank you so much for reading this and commenting!
Reading this made me think of someone on a swing, not swinging but watching, maybe writing in a book. And this person only swings when the wind blows with that nice fall wind of maple and pine.

The words paint a charming picture.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Colton Warr

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate the kind words! A truly defined picture you describe there, I'm gl.. read more
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B.J
A simple leaf to create the feeling of love in a poem. Brilliant.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Colton Warr

3 Years Ago

Sometimes it is the simplest things that convey the most emotion. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
B.J

3 Years Ago

The simple things in life, sometimes are always the best. you're welcome
Amazing use of the Fall season and the emotions/thoughts of love. I like the way your described your emotion and want. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Colton Warr

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading, my friend!! I appreciate you stopping by and commenting, thank you!.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. The poem is outstanding.

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Added on September 24, 2014
Last Updated on October 2, 2014
Tags: Love, Romance, Fall, Leaves

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Colton Warr
Colton Warr

Lexington, KY



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Just using a pen to scribble my thoughts and emotion, hoping to generate the same from you. All of my words are mine. Everything I write is real and true, things that I am going through in my life. I .. more..

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