Last Anniversary (Part I)

Last Anniversary (Part I)

A Story by Colton Warr
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Her green eyes caught his blue... A late 1930s twisting tale of a love that was never meant to be...

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Last Anniversary

A Story by Colton Warr


Street lights passing him by as he raced through the soul of the city. He weaved in and out of alley ways, and intertwined with vehicles parked on the side of the street. He was running from something he had done not too long ago. A greedy mistake he had once made, now finally catching up to him. If this was, then how many more would soon run him down as well? He kept running. He hadn’t run this much since high school. He couldn’t stop now. He sprinted on through the darkness. A darkness that was ever illuminating. The city was buzzing with all things lifelike and beautiful. He would pass through the occasional crowd of flappers dressed in starry dresses and topped with assorted designer hats.

“Excuse me, ladies.”

Or crash through the sprinkled in couple that was out on the town on a perfect Friday night.

“My apologies.”

He was slowing down, he had been running all night. He had to shake his pursuers while recovering at the same time. He needed rest. As he exited a dark and windy alley, he caught glimpse of a haven, The Castro Theatre. He didn’t indulge in wasting any time to think it over, he couldn’t afford the luxury. It looked as if a show was about to begin which is exactly what the doctor ordered. He could blend in and lose his tail, perfect. He was already dressed in a sort of fashion that would suggest he was going out to a show, he always was. He stopped and readjusted himself. He straightened his jacket and dusted his shoulders off. He reestablished his bow tie and padded down his pant thighs. He ran his hand through his already slicked back hair until it felt sufficiently styled. He took a deep but short breath, slid his right hand in his pocket, said out loud to himself “you’re alright” Accompanied by a grin, and began to walk ever so strut-like toward The Castro. As if he wasn’t being chased at all, as if he was anticipating a marvelous evening, as if he belonged amongst the crowd. The scene almost felt like fate, like it was his destiny to arrive here on this very night. He shook the feeling aside, and purchased one ticket to the splendid “Phantom of the Opera”. A show he had seen once before, on a much more relaxed evening. Although he didn’t finish it, as he recalled he had to leave early for some reason. Perhaps this time, he would get to finish it.


He entered the theatre, scanning everyone that was walking in around him to assure himself that this was a good decision, to assure him that they hadn’t followed him in here. The theatre was so grand; it had just opened a few years back if memory served him well.

“Robbie…Robbie!”

 He clutched tightly a switchblade that he concealed in the inner pocket of his jacket and turned to cautiously greet whoever was calling his name, and saw that it was an old friend from high school.

“Hey…Robbie! Hey how have you been?” He breathed a sigh of relief.

“Walter Frank, I haven’t seen your sorry a*s since that old hay burner of yours broke down just outside the city,” he cracked at him. It was nice to see a familiar face amidst his night.

“Now why do you have to always live in the past Rob, come on, and in front of the Jane too?” He pointed to a brunette that was accompanying him.

“My apologies Walt, I didn’t know you had finally fallen for a doll,” he retreated.

“What’s the lovely lady’s name?” The Jane replied “Audrey.”

He responded “Well it’s an absolute pleasure to meet you Audrey. In all honesty Walt’s a good guy. I’m happy for you both.”

As the Jane smiled, Walter replied, “Well look at that, you can be nice and decent sober!” They all laughed. “Listen let’s keep moving to our seats, no sense standing around,” Robert implored.

Walter quickly responded while stopping Robert “Actually me and Audrey were heading down to that new juice joint down the street, want to join us, Robbie, for old times’ sake? We can find you a doll on the way.”

He mulled the thought over in his head. If he exited this theatre now, odds are he would run into those who were chasing him. Decision made.

“Ah geez, Walt, I’d love to but I’ve already purchased the ticket for this show, perhaps I’ll meet up with you afterwards. Promise you’ll save me a drink or two?” He then looked at Audrey “Make sure he saves me a drink will ya? I’m sure you know this man’s love for juice is second only to his love for you,” he said with a smile.

She smiled in return and said, “I know exactly what you mean, I’ll make sure you have one drink, but that may be all I can promise you.”

He turned to Walter with a smile “Listen, one drink is all I need. I’ll see you guys over there; I need to grab a seat. We’ll catch up down the street Walt.”

 The two shook hands as Robert finished the sentence and then he turned and headed to the door leading into the theatre.

Walt replied under his breath as he walked away, “We most certainly will.”


 As Robert approached the door, he quickly went back to scanning the crowd, to assure no one had slipped in while he was distracted. As he looked at all of the individual faces, he saw something that stopped him dead in his tracks. A ghost from his past, and it wasn’t Walter Frank. It was something far more beautiful, a beauty he had once seen, a beauty that was once his. A one in a million type of doll, one that if you ever have her in your grasp, you don’t let her go…but he did. She had a wave of blonde hair that ended at her shoulders, and the top of the black dress that she wore. It went down to just above her knees. She had the face and look of perfection, with the most glorious green eyes that you would ever see. Her smile lit up any room that she was in, including this one. He found himself staring, staring at the first girl he had ever stared at since…since her.

His thoughts began to race. “Should I go talk to her?” he asked himself, “Absolutely not! That would be out of line, plus you don’t even know what state she’s in after what happened…wait, what happened? What would I even say?” He was intimidated and confused, as he stood in a crowd of people, just staring at her laughing and smiling. She was glowing. As she continued to smile and laugh with the group of people that she was with, she turned her head and broke eye contact for just a second, but a second was all that was needed to unlock a lifetime full of memory and love. Her green eyes caught his blue. A feeling ripped through his soul, he wanted to move, he wanted to run away but he couldn’t. For several seconds they looked at each other, as if in disbelief as well as relief. Finally she raised up one of her gloved hands as if to motion him over to her and the people she was accompanied with. And accompanying the wave was one of those smiles of hers. There was no running now, as if he could. He smiled, and began to walk with his weak knees toward her at the bottom of the stairs leading up to the balcony seats. She grew more beautiful as he moved closer, and the butterflies in his stomach grew with every step he took towards her.

She spoke first, “Oh my God, Robert, is that you? I haven’t seen you in ages.”

He was tongue tied at first, but then responded while casually nodding his head, “Marie, it’s been a few years.” That’s it? That’s all he could muster up? He was nervous.

 “Well, Robert, let me introduce you to my two friends here.”

She held out her hand to point towards the couple she was talking to, “This is John Howard and his new bride and one of my oldest friends, Julie Anne. We were just catching up about how the wedding went.”

He turned to them and replied, “It’s a pleasure to meet you both, I trust that since you both are standing here tonight the wedding went well?”  They all laughed as his confidence in the situation started to rise.

The couple replied with a resounding, “Yes!” the bride then said, “Well listen, it was nice catching up but I believe the show is about to start so we all better get in there. It seems you have a handsome gentleman here that you need to do a little catching up with as well.”

She smiled and replied, “It’s always a pleasure, you all enjoy the show.”

As they left she turned to him and asked, “So, where is your seat?”

Robert replied, “I believe I am down here in the general seating area, where are you?” She replied, “I am up in the balcony, would you like to come sit with me?” He wanted to say yes but for some reason he didn’t.

 “Oh I don’t know if we need to do that, I mean I don’t want to bother you during your favorite show.” The very fact that he remembered that after all of this time made her smile and blush.

“Nonsense, didn’t you hear the woman, you have a pretty lady here that you need to do some catching up with.”

She then turned and started upstairs. He smiled at her playful comment and started up the stairs behind her. As they arrived at the balcony seating level, they sat in prime seating, off to the left of the center of the balcony.

 “How did you manage these seats?” he asked.

“A very early birthday present,” she said back with a smile.

“Well isn’t that nice of them.”

He was trying to pry at the question of if she was married or was steady with anyone, but failed. The lights went down and the show began.

He leaned over and said, “This is a magnificent theatre, have you been here before?”  

She replied, “Yes, once before. Will you be talking the entire show?”  

He turned and looked at her and could tell she was smiling through the darkness of the theatre. “Well this wouldn’t be much of a date if we couldn’t talk to each other.”

He fired back with a smile of his own. “Who says this is a date?” she asked back.

“Well you did invite me up here, you know?” they both laughed.

“This is not a date, this is two old friends catching up,” she stated. He still couldn’t tell if she was steady with anyone or not.

He then leaned over after a few seconds and said, “Well now how are we supposed to catch up if I can’t talk to you?”

She looked at him with another one of her smiles and rolled her eyes, “Hush!”


Outside of the theatre we find three cars parked on the side of the street across from the Castro Theatre. There were men standing in suits surrounding them. Walter Frank was walking with a quick step towards the vehicles. An old man emerged from the back seat of one of them.

As Walter arrived at the cars he proclaimed, “I’ve got him, he’s inside the theatre watching the show.”

The old man took a deep breath, reached into his inner jacket pocket and pulled out a long Cuban cigar. He began to light it.

Walter anxiously asked, “So should we take him now? I mean he’s just sitting there.”

 The older man looked up from his cigar at Walter and spoke. “Well that would be awful foolish of us now wouldn’t it? There are too many people in there for us to do anything discreetly. And that’s the whole point, to bump him off, discreetly.”

Walter then replied, “Look boss, I don’t like it. What if he gets away again?”

The older man took a large inhale of his cigar, removed it from his mouth, and then exhaled the white smoke. “He’s no longer running. We have him caught up in one spot, trapped. This was a mistake on his part. Besides, wasn’t it Napoleon who said it best: “Never interrupt your enemy while he is making a mistake?” He is trapping himself, now let’s not interrupt him. We have him right where we want him…a dead man watching his last show.”

He put the cigar back in his mouth and blew another puff of white smoke. “You want to do something useful, go in there, make sure he’s still there and then go around back. I’ll have Joe and Mick meet you back there.”

Walter’s face lit up. “Yes sir.”

He gave an awkward salute, and started back towards the theatre. The older man turned and looked at his right hand man and cracked, “That guy, there’s nobody home is there?”

The right hand guy laughed and shook his head, “Nobody at all.”

The older man looked at some of his men and shouted, “Joe, Mick, to the back of the theatre and cover any exits.”

As they began sprinting towards the back of the theatre he said loud enough to where everyone could hear it, “We’re taking this prick tonight.”


Back in the theatre, about 25 minutes of the show had passed. Robert leaned over to her, “Why don’t we get out of here and head down the street to a place I know. I’ll take you out on a date since you won’t take me on one.”

She looked at him and tried to convince him to stay. But he insisted with one of his smiles this time, “Come on, you can see The Phantom any other time, and I know you’ve already seen it once, how many other times are you going to get to see me?”

She started a sentence but then stopped. Perhaps his powers and charm were finally taking its toll on her. She smiled and looked deep into his eyes. They were locked, again. She finally said, “Alright, let’s go.”

They both got up and left the balcony seating area, and headed for the stairs leading back down to the main lobby area.

“Can I use the ladies room before we venture across the street?” She said to him.

“Yes, definitely the one across the street is just terrible.”

She replied in a sarcastic tone, “You’ve seen the inside of the ladies room over there?”

He then realized what it had sounded like he had said and quickly tried to backtrack. “No no, I just meant in general, it’s kind of trashy down there.”

She laughed and so did he, and she went into the ladies room. As he waited for her, he paced back and forth going over their conversations so far this evening. They were just like the ones they had back in high school. He couldn’t help but smile. Everything that he had once felt for her had all returned in one night. They had so much more catching up to do. He began to go over romantic places around the city in his head that he could take her and they could talk.

As she exited the bathroom she noticed the smile on his face. “What are you smiling about?” she asked curiously.

“I have a couple things in mind for tonight…you’re one lucky gal,” he replied with a grin and an outreached hand.

“Oh yeah, tell me more,” she replied as she took his hand for the first time in years.

She was feeling just as he was; a kind of overwhelming feeling of connection and emotion. Neither of them had any idea how they could just step right back in where they left off, but that’s exactly what they were doing. As they made their way to the bottom of the stairs, Robert noticed the main doors to the general seating opening. A figure appeared out of the open door, it was a man in a suit. As he held the door open for two more figures, Robert noticed that one of them was Walter. He also noticed the other two men from early today, they had Robert caught if it hadn’t have been for a car accident that allowed him to escape.

As Marie continued on from an earlier conversation, Robert couldn’t help but interrupt and say “Walter?” aloud. Just as the word left his lips, all three figures immediately turned to the direction of the voice. The two men in suits drew pistols from their jackets, took aim at Robert and Marie, and opened fire...
Part II coming soon... 

© 2015 Colton Warr


Author's Note

Colton Warr
A longer short story of mine so I split it up into three parts. I wrote this about two years ago and have only given it small revisions. I wanted to go ahead and share this though because I am finsihing up a different short story. Let me know what you guys think of Part I, if you like the story and if you're excited for Part II. Be patient with this guys, It picks up dramatically in the next two parts.

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Wow, I loved this first part. Really interesting and you really do have a way with words. I'll read part 2 now, looking forward to it. Thanks for sharing your writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Colton Warr

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm happy you enjoyed this first part and I look forward to hearing .. read more
good write,

introduction= thumbs up

description of everything= excellent

very amazing:)
it was down scrolling one. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Colton Warr

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed the first part of the story! Thank you very much .. read more
Great job :) I love the introduction to the story it intrigues the reader and the line I was running from something I did not too long ago makes me want to know what could he have possibly done to make people chase him. I loved it and will read the next two parts when I have the time. Keep up the great work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Colton Warr

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Crystal! I appreciate the positive words and encouragement! I'm so glad you enj.. read more
This was a very interesting story! I really liked the attention to details and the plots twists! Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Jeremy! I appreciate you stopping by and giving this a read! I'm glad you enjoy.. read more
Jeremy Hiles

9 Years Ago

My pleasure! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read the sequels!
mazing!!!!!!!! I love to read stories.... Can't wait for what will happen next....!!! I noticed Part 2.... Im going to read it now...... You write really good... It was as if Im living the story myself... You should really get it published... You can lengthen it and convert it into a novel.....!! Reminded me of a book I once read by james paterson!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Than you so much Nene! I appreciate the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed Part I! Thanks for saying I.. read more
Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

James Paterson is one of my favorites! Glad I could remind you of him!
Such an amazing job. You've got such a talent for writing it's mind blowing. Keep writing, I definitely would love to read more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kiana! Your words are very kind! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for stopp.. read more
This writing is simply breath taking to say the least. The way the words are strung across in sentences is simply beautiful. Your talent truly shines more than ever in this brilliant piece. This is one of the most brilliant things that I have read in a long time. I commend you upon this. Amazing job,please, oh great one, teach me to write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Deliah! I appreciate you stopping by and checking this out for me! I'm so glad .. read more
A very interesting tale so far. If this is a short story, or a novel, it will have to be lengthened. I like it very much so far. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Valentine! I'm glad that you like it so far! Part II will be coming soon!
Wow, this story is nice! I really like it. Looking forward to read part II. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Lyndy! I'm glad you liked Part I! Part II is coming soon, Thanks for reading!
I can't wait for past two! I loved how real the characters felt and the imagery was really interesting! There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing really upsetting or distracting. Overall I loved it and you did a fantastic job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Colton Warr

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Alexa! I appreciate the kind words and I appreciate you giving this a read! I'm.. read more

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Tags: Love, Romance, heartbreak, Anniversary, Kiss, Heart, Story, Love Story, City, Lights, Short Story

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