An Undelivered Poem

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An Undelivered Poem

A Poem by Colton Warr

I feel unsettled and missing

Like a nomad traveling through an unknown land

Nettled and Reminiscing 

I once knew every small texture of your hand

I feel confused and paranoid

Like a man who had just committed murder

Fused and Destroyed 

My mind does everything to preserve her 

I feel soulless and guilty

Like the Grim Reaper who comes to take 

Boneless and Filthy 

I am broken in ways I did not know I could break 

I feel stressed and disturbed 

Like a student before the final exam

Oppressed and Perturbed 

I think I have given you all that I am

*****

Could I ask?

Do you sometimes feel as if you’re going through the motions?

Drink from my flask

I beg to again be lost within your ocean

Could I touch?

Do you sometimes reach out for my face with your hand?

Your hearts clutch

Shackle me in, never again to disband 

Could I kiss?

Do you sometimes still gaze into nothing, wishing it was me?

I guess I miss,

Whenever you were the only thing I would ever see

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry my friend. You brought me in and held me to the last words.
"Could I touch?
Do you sometimes reach out for my face with your hand?
Your hearts clutch
Shackle me in, never again to disband
Could I kiss?"
The above lines are amazing. I could write a complete poem from these words and emotion. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, Coyote! I'm happy you enjoyed this poem! Your words are always so kind and encouraging, I deeply appreciate that! The emotion was strong in this one for me and these words cut deep. If you remember my poem "She is..." This is about the same girl, we are no longer together and it is from my doing. Even after all that she is still my muse though, isn't that interesting? Thanks for stopping by and giving this a read, my friend!

[Coyote Poetry]

We don't forget and you are welcome.

[Paramount]

I absolutely loved every line of it. I do not know what else to say. It was just amazing. This is an incredible piece of poetry. Well done.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I appreciate the kind words! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

this is so captivating! the words attack in a very pleasant way . thank you for sharing.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Jacquelene! I appreciate your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and felt as if the words were attacking. Indeed, that tells me you could feel their emotion. Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Rob Smiley]

Wow! This poem seems to have great construction, but it's also very ' freeish ' at the same time.
Emotions are brilliantly expressed, congratulations!
Kudos for you Colton Warr.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Rob! I appreciate your kind words and positivity! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you very much for reading!

[Rainslover]

This was gorgeously painful! My heart warmed up feeling the love and tearing up seeing it's pain! All I could say is I could feel it.

Do you sometimes still gaze into nothing, wishing it was me?

This line touched me so bad! Wonderful poem!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I appreciate the kind remarks! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and could feel the pain and longing within these words! Thank you very much for giving it a read!

[Charly Priest]

Powerful lines, specially liked the last part asking the questions, it does as another commentator said "draws you in"

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Charly! I appreciate the kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the questions at the end and were pulled in by them. I believe that every poem should draw the reader in, so that they can connect their inner self with the poem. I'm glad that happened for you here. Thanks for giving this a read!

[Charly Priest]

"Every poem should draw the reader in, so they can connect their inner self with the poem" Very true what you just said.

[Nightfeather]

You are a one of the god-tier writers, for you poem makes me disconnect with the outside world for a moment and connect with my inner self. Raising questions and linking meaning of your sentences, for this poem is the embodiment of brilliance. If one searches for beauty in a dictionary, the name Colton Warr's writing pops up. Never stop with your writing, for you are just to talented and your writing must not fade.

Good job :D

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so very much, my friend! I don't know what to say, this review has made my day! You put a smile on my face and warmth in my heart! I appreciate the kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! I am serious when I say this, I am grateful for your kind words. This review is magical. Thank you so much for giving this piece a read and thank you for the positivity!

[butterfly desire]

This is very well done your writing is such an insperation

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I appreciate you saying that! That, to me, is the greatest compliment we as writers can receive. That we inspired someone else. Thank you for saying that. I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for checking it out!

[butterfly desire]

How could I not I so truly enjoy your writing

[AmberThePuppet]

You are very much welcome.

[AmberThePuppet]

Am speechless.. But this is really good and you are truly gifted...I also compliment on the courage to share yourself with us I say this because for me this just ain't poetry but a story part of your life that kind of iñspires me..

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much!! Your words are too kind! Thank you so much for the positivity and encouragement! This review made me smile! I'm happy these words could inspire you! Thank you so much for giving this a read!

[Benson Osuji]

Nicely written thanks for sharing it with me

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving this a read!

[Edis Radoncic]

Wow man I can actually feel the emotion from this poem. This really impressive work. Keep it up!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much, Edis! I'm happy you enjoyed this piece and were able to feel the emotion. I appreciate your kind words! Thanks for giving it a read!