The Suns Interlude

The Suns Interlude

A Poem by Colton Warr
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The sun always finds a way....

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The Suns Interlude
A Poem by Colton Warr

I spoke to the sun today
What poured from her head were golden rays
The wind played gently with the curls
I wish I was the wind, if I must say

I witnessed her fire, I saw her blaze
What exploded from her eyes had me locked within a daze
The stars and planets all long to be hers
If I could just be as close as the clouds, forever there I would stay

I heard her voice burn through my ears
The constant heat of it subdued all of my fears
No wonder everyone wants to be scorched
If she is solar I would be content with burning for years

I shared a kiss with the sun today
What it did to me was block my airway
The heat from her lips left me breathless
Now I do nothing but wish it was sunny everyday

I envy the clouds for they are closer to you than I
And, oh, what I'd give to join you in the sky
To be forever close to your energy, I care not if I fry
They say no human can get this close to the great fire...but I can still try





© 2016 Colton Warr



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This is poem speaks to me on so many levels. I love the extended that you implement on this poem with the sun. it made the poem seem so real and vivid! Amazing job!

Posted 1 Month Ago


its a great one though be careful to get burned...if you know what i mean hahah.xx

Posted 7 Months Ago


I love that last line the best, Icarus. This is one of my new favorites, I love the wordplay and imagery, and wonder between the lines.
Well played!

Posted 7 Months Ago


This poem must be the greatest declaration of love that I have read in a long time. Every word clings on to my heart, and my goosebumps are proof of just how good this poem is.

My favorite part is when you write:

"The constant heat of it subdued all of my fears
No wonder everyone wants to be scorched".

Just a lovely sentence, and this whole poem was such a delight to read.

Looking forward to obsess over the rest of your work.

// O

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much! Your words are seriously too kind! I'm glad you enjoyed this so much you got go.. read more
Amazing poetry my friend.
"I shared a kiss with the sun today
What it did to me was block my airway
The heat from her lips left me breathless
Now I do nothing but wish it was sunny everyday "
I liked and I understood the above lines. Good to kiss the sun and feel her upon your face. Thank you Colton for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much, my friend! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! It's always nice to receive a kiss.. read more
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend. I always enjoy your work.
This was an incredibly refreshing piece! I can really feel the intensity of your words here. This is now a new absolute fave of mine and it's going into my library of favorites. Keep it up! 👍

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Maria! I appreciate your kind and encouraging words! I'm glad you enjoyed this pi.. read more
The sheer affection of word, leaves a mark within me, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much, Thomas! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Peace and success to you! Thanks for rea.. read more
Creatively delightful read!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reading!
Poem making the painting of closeness and affection in miind with colours of red and white, this is what I can say to describe your poem. It is truly a wonderful poem. the way you have compared the loved one with sun and the way you have expressed your wish to have minimum distance b/w you and the loved one which is almost equal to zero is sensational. It is superb.
especially this lines:
If she is solar I would be content with burning for years

good write! Keep on writing!!!:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!!! Your words are too kind! Thank you for the positivity! I'm glad you fancied thi.. read more
irenic

1 Year Ago

You are welcome!............................:)
A delightful and expressive explanation of a hot love.
"What exploded from her eyes had me locked within a daze
The stars and planets all long to be hers."
Love this line.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving this a read! Peace and success.. read more

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Added on September 6, 2016
Last Updated on September 7, 2016
Tags: Love, Romance, Poetry, Poems, Sun, Interlude

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Colton Warr
Colton Warr

Lexington, KY



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Just using a pen to scribble my thoughts and emotion, hoping to generate the same from you. All of my words are mine. Everything I write is real and true, things that I am going through in my life. I .. more..

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