The Suns Interlude

The sun always finds a way....

The Suns Interlude
A Poem by Colton Warr

I spoke to the sun today
What poured from her head were golden rays
The wind played gently with the curls
I wish I was the wind, if I must say

I witnessed her fire, I saw her blaze
What exploded from her eyes had me locked within a daze
The stars and planets all long to be hers
If I could just be as close as the clouds, forever there I would stay

I heard her voice burn through my ears
The constant heat of it subdued all of my fears
No wonder everyone wants to be scorched
If she is solar I would be content with burning for years

I shared a kiss with the sun today
What it did to me was block my airway
The heat from her lips left me breathless
Now I do nothing but wish it was sunny everyday

I envy the clouds for they are closer to you than I
And, oh, what I'd give to join you in the sky
To be forever close to your energy, I care not if I fry
They say no human can get this close to the great fire...but I can still try

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A delightful and expressive explanation of a hot love.
"What exploded from her eyes had me locked within a daze
The stars and planets all long to be hers."
Love this line.

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving this a read! Peace and success to you!

[Myenigma]

i like it, very creative and imaginative

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reading!

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Wonderful, I cherish the use of metaphor; how you directly compare whom you are writing to with the sun. The entire lines indeed are well arranged that your readers could see themselves as the actor. Nice job

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I appreciate your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving it a read!

[Vanesa Markovic]

Classical romance, love love love it x

[Colton Warr]

Thank you very much!! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for stopping by and giving it a read!

[andrew mitchell]

Warm sunny thoughts no wonder the ancients worshipped the sun. To think one day the sun will burn out, just like the analogy of love here.

[Colton Warr]

Beautiful thoughts, my friend! And terrifying, as well. The essence of a love as strong as the sun and a woman as scorching as it burning out scares me! A true question, is love forever or is love fleeting? Perhaps that answer is different for everyone. Thanks for giving this a read!

[Mayank]

Loved the analogy you have used here!

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much, my friend! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving it some time! Peace and success to you!

[Brianna Brie]

As you admire her intense beauty, your gentleness is evident. This was a pleasure to read.

[Colton Warr]

I love the way you took this piece because that is exactly how I meant it. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! Thank you so much for checking it out!

[wordman]

kissed by the sun,dressed by the stars

[Colton Warr]

Love that line, my friend! Thank you very much for giving this one a read! Positive vibes to you on this fine Thursday!

[Valentine]

Love this and love the picture, Gods creations are the most beautiful, more need to take the time to stop and enjoy them. Valentine

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed both the piece and the picture! I took it over the summer while visiting Naples, Florida. I couldn't agree more. It's a fast world out there. We must be sure to slow down and see the beauty that surrounds us. Peace to you! Thanks for reading this!

[tp340]

Keep it going, I love it....
Your writing always leaves me wanting more......

[Colton Warr]

Thank you so very much! Your kind words do warm my heart! I'm glad to have your support! Thank you so much for giving this a read! Peace to you!