A Night's Fog

A Night's Fog

A Poem by Colton Warr
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I am lost within the Night...

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A Nights Fog
A Poem by Colton Warr

One more shot until the world spins
What dust has been kicked up by my actions?
Tonight I just can't seem to think
If you'd like to exit just tell me when

One more place before this all ends
A bunch of night owls, just me and my friends
You've come to say that we are on the brink?
I'm here to declare, rules are meant to suffer bends

One more kiss before I die, please
And then look at this iPhone and say cheese
Let's document it all before we sink
And fall down underneath the palm trees

One more night before we all cease
If you need warmth I can become your fleece
And did you catch that? At you, I sent a wink
This night will forever hold of me, a piece





© 2016 Colton Warr



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Nice poem thanks for sharing the wonderful talent.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Enjoyed reading your poem..I get a sense of happy memories with dear friends. Time does go on..cherished memories are forever. "If you need warmth I can become your fleece." Well written and expressed.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Loved this piece. Felt it.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Thay is like holding on to the moments we live in..which we go through...we cherish sometimes regrets but that's what life is abt...moments keeps us alive...I liked it

Posted 1 Year Ago


It's definitely interesting how we hold onto memories with such detail..To me it felt like a collage of broken love images, that took me back to some of my own foggy nights... I enjoyed the read and for what it's worth great job! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


What a night, sounds like all the steps to the ritual was observed except the bowing to the porcelain God to finish it :~) Great writing exercise, it is somewhat whimsical and cryptic at the same time, it offers different levels of understanding to different readers due to the own experiences. Outstanding! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Year Ago


I like the rhythm in this. I can really imagine how this unfolded. Great poem overall.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

12 Months Ago

Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for giving this a rea.. read more
Must have that last selfie or picture. Sink or swim. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

12 Months Ago

Exactly. Such an interesting thing in our society. It's crazy how it's changed in just the last ten .. read more
I want to be one of the night owls, ah the troubles ahead! Well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

12 Months Ago

Haha by all means, join the flock! I'm always down to get into some trouble with new people! Thanks .. read more
One more shot until the world spins
What dust has been kicked up by my actions?
Tonight I just can't seem to think
If you'd like to exit just tell me when

epic lines!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Colton Warr

12 Months Ago

Thank you very much!! I'm glad you found these lines epic! Thank you, as always, for giving this a r.. read more
irenic

12 Months Ago

welcome..............:)

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Added on September 6, 2016
Last Updated on September 6, 2016
Tags: Night, Poem, Poetry, Live, Life, Nighttime, Love, Hate

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Colton Warr
Colton Warr

Lexington, KY



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Just using a pen to scribble my thoughts and emotion, hoping to generate the same from you. All of my words are mine. Everything I write is real and true, things that I am going through in my life. I .. more..

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