A Sun I Never Knew

When I see the sun,
Shining in a blue sky,
I always think of the one,
Who helped me to fly.

He who saved me
From the unmerciful above
He who enslaved me
With his pure, unguarded love

Depression leaving it's mark
Never to see the sun I craved
Left alone in the dark
Alone, alive...afraid.

With hair bright as the sun,
And eyes of a violet hue.
Came a reason to live on...
Came a sun I never knew.

Reviews

[Matt]

the rhyming at the end really brought it all together.
deep words man.

[Sarah]

wow, this is amazing. There are so many different ways to look at this poem, but I think everyone can relate it.

[DBURKE]

Great work. I love the imagery. I love the emotion as well. I felt as if I was given a gift when reading it! Great work

[Mistaken]

I agree with Natalie and Anna and this....100 % of amazing trueness!!!!

[Rasha]

Great poem!!
When I read it again, I saw it in a different way x

[Frantzuu]

Great poem, you can look at it in many different ways. good job. :D

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is beautiful "with hair bright as the sun, And eyes of a violet hue. Came a reason to live on... Came a sun I never knew" excellent

[FatalRewind]

Violet eyes, hair as the sun, must be a scared handsome man. But a sun you never knew, but thou helped you fly, and you are reminded of him when you see the sun. A very short, and cleverly written I might say, poem.

[Natalie.]

*Warning: This Content is Rated Mature for uncharacteristically girly content--you have been warned.* So, without further adieu....AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's so sweet! Kinda depressing, but the overall idea is soooo adorable! I waffles it, dearly!

[hope.]

wow. this is great. there can be so many interrpretations of what you're talking about.
we all fall into a pit at least one time in our lives, but you show that we can get out and live on. (: great job. i love it. keep it up :D