Island

Island

A Poem by Commanda Panda

I couldn’t be more alone. More lost. More bored.

If I run away what will I move toward?

Just the same old thing with a different face.

I want to disappear without a trace.

Bullshit’s hit a high and the love is less.

Who’s to blame for that? You can take a guess,

But the blaming game would only make more stress.

Too bad it doesn’t help to get this off my chest.

I couldn’t be more confused or ostracized.

I’m not prized enough in other people’s eyes.

I’ve tried to be myself and I’ve tried compromise,

But it all results in someone breaking ties.

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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poor panda, i should be getting a new laptop soon

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sometimes even Pandas get the blues

Posted 10 Years Ago


I so get this one, some days are just that way, sometimes it feels more often than not...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I've tried to be myself and I've tried compromise. Yup. This is such a smart poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


God I've done this...when I'm just so...disenchanted...then I write about it and it's like...really? Is that it then? That should have made me feel better but it just made me sound like a whiny ungrateful b***h xD I like the way you've brought it to life. Great job, CP ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

I don't think you're a b***h, a bit of an imp, maybe.
KAOlmsted

10 Years Ago

Ha! Show's how much you know ;-)
I completely relate, good job Panda. I also find some humor and naughty dirty stuff to read from you. But this actually is real true and calls to me in deep ways.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

I like to mix it up. Gotta show people sometimes I can write about real life and be mature. lol
Couldn't have said it better myself. You honestly just summed up much of my thoughts as of late, now stop reading my mind!
But seriously I hope you find what you're looking for.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

I hope the same for you, buddy.

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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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