The Deeper

The Deeper

A Poem by Commanda Panda

I’m back to split your wig like the Red Sea, but I’m not Moses

I’m more like Godzilla with that bad halitosis

I’ve looked into your eyes and I know that you know this:

If my genius was drugs you’d die of overdoses

I’m the king ruling over a literary reich

The way that you write proves you’re literary tikes

But the mind has infinite potential

So why is it the bad writing is torrential?

Why is it becoming exponential?

© 2014 Commanda Panda

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yup why is the bad writing torrential. love the flow in this one. extra kudos for "Reich" in a poem

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Added on September 2, 2014
Last Updated on September 2, 2014
Tags: love, writing, sad, sadness


Commanda Panda
Commanda Panda


Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..