My Persephone

My Persephone

A Poem by Commanda Panda

You’re my constant companion

My angel and demon

You give me motivation

When my rhyme is without reason

You gave my life more season

A zest, a bit more zing

You woke me from a coma

I feel like a human being

With a dash of supernatural

I could fly with demon’s wings

You conjure my emotion

Like a devil from hell’s rings

I’d call you Messiah

But I am still damned

However my time in hell

Is going better than planned

You are my Persephone

The glow in my gloom

Though there is no sunshine

You find some way to bloom

© 2014 Commanda Panda

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Man you killed it, insane piece. Love this. Ain't no girl as beautiful as a one that can survive the eternity of hell. The glow in my gloom, you make words beautiful brother.

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Commanda Panda

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.
Beautiful work of art!~xoxo~

Posted 3 Years Ago

So you're Hades in this. .......................

Posted 3 Years Ago

Commanda Panda

3 Years Ago

Nope. I'm Commanda Panda. I killed Hades and stole his s**t.

3 Years Ago

Damn straight, my man.
I like this! Much better than your works about putting it to, well, let's just say, this is sweet and lovely, suits your pretty face much better than your usual stuff

Posted 3 Years Ago

this is actually a lovely and tender poem and pays wonderful homage to the original myth. love that last line about finding a way to bloom.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Commanda Panda

3 Years Ago

Thanks. It isn't my usual style, but sometimes you have to switch it up.

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5 Reviews
Added on September 2, 2014
Last Updated on September 2, 2014
Tags: love, happiness, darkness


Commanda Panda
Commanda Panda


Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..


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