Haiku 1

Haiku 1

A Poem by Confidential
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2 in the morning.

 

This time, she's not coming back.

 

And it's all.. my..    ..fault.


© 2011 Confidential



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Good job. :) I haven't read many haikus in my life until now, but I like this one. It expresses waiting and hopelessness to me.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dude! I've had that once...But... with a guyy.. lmao(:
It's very....Great.
But I have to ask!

Why 2a.m.? Such a random time of dayy(:

--Fallyn

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very creative
Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Like some others, I've never really been one to understand Haiku. But I have to admit it's pretty intresting- the way it leaves the reader guessing and assuming. I wonder what the Haiku is about, but I have a guess. haha, nicccee work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sad, simple and sweet. The three S's. Hard to hit.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I don't really understand Haiku very well, but this really spoke to me. Such few and simple words can be very...powerful. And these definitely were.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on July 21, 2011
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