Too late

Help me with a name on this one! I just started writing it yesterday, and it's not fully finished and I will finish it probably today or tomorrow. But I really need help with a name, lol.

In the hearts of the restless and eyes of the relentless

Breathless I lay here senseless tryin' to stay under arrest

But with the claws slaying reckless disobeying the rest

Swaying the crest of every praying guest til they display the test

But with being adolescent deaming myself benevolent 

Dreamin' of the present til my demons ascend in

Breaking my glass fort gleaming of resin

Seemingly deafen my voice singing to descendants

Of every broken glass, bottle, and every promise filled pendant

Regardless of any memory lying within it

Pushing to my limits trusting every single minute

Gathering resistance shadowing persistance forget it

I'm mastering perseverance, I'm answering to the fearless

I'm Shattering the tears 'n I'm staggering for the clearness

I'm Capturing the feelings of every straggling disappearance 

I'm Balancing my treasons trying to flatter every missed season

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

your fluidity with rhythmic literary motion is poetry in and of itself~ the creative~ sibilant smooth aspect of your word streaming is absolutely delightful to witness~ to experience~ I adore the way the sounds just embrace one to another as my eyes lilt from line end to line beginning~my mouth shaping the creative aspect~ the phonetic beauty you've created here~ brava!

[Gracefool_Lyn]

I love this. I think all of your poems are amazing but this is definately one of my favorites :)

[Summer'sBreeze]

it's very good

[Harmonica winds]

really liked the last three sentences, This is a powerful and emotional write. like this