Who should have stayed?

Who should have stayed?

A Poem by Bertha

You can go, if you can not fight anymore.

I thought you'd stay this time
I left my home to hold you with all my might
Where did i go wrong?
Am i now just another person you'll say you met yesterday?
How did all the perfection you saw fade all away?
You lied to me.
You are a good choreographer!
You taught me how to dance your steps so well
Then you left me
As if what i put on the floor with all my sweat,
Was nothing but compared to what?!

I thought I would stay
After all you did for me back then
Pulling me to where none understood but us
You made me laugh at random things!
But in the end everything was systematic
Now that the cold wind has made us sick
That all that we ever took in inlove,
We have now vomited out
Even if I stay,
I will be alone

© 2019 Bertha

Author's Note

One of the times you say goodbye when you didnt expect. What do you think?

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Oh Wow! sad yet well expressed, so nicely written

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Leaving and worse yet being left is a very sad thing. It happens, but then we must move on. We must hope and indeed even pray that soon the hurt will be gone and something better is waiting for us.

Take care - Dave

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

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