In the Shining Stars

This poem describes my view of the stars. I try to point out the many things I see.

I see in the stars

beauty and grace.

A very bright twinkle

that shines in its place.

I see a bunch of beautiful pictures

that shine brightly at night.

They are so detailed,

that they are out of sight.

I see many great things in the stars.

I know these things can take me very far.

Author's Note

Tell me anything you find wrong with it or any feedback on it.

Reviews

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Very nice flow and rhyme. And I felt like I was flying amongst the stars.

[John D'alquen]

*Slow clap* Well done! What you wrote really captures the imagination of just looking at stars,and wondering what they see.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Nice little poem. I think many people reading this will relate to it.
Standing under the stars lets the imagination fly free.
Good write.

[Corbin Driver]

Thank you!

[Chidoriflower]

I love this. I love the stars. Amazing....it can take you away to such far places. It's a distant treasure...Zis is perfecto.