Finding You

2014

With her, the sun drops from view. 
Waves take hold, the ocean blue.
Down this walk, I see forever too. 
Still I smile when it ends with you.

Among the trees the breeze is true. 
Take this moment, can have a few. 
Grab a hold and away we flew. 
Where we land is up to you.

Reviews

[Ashwin Shanker]

Great poem... It is tough to find a beautiful poem on love here... There are so many writers but few who really make an impact.. Your poem a true silver needle in the haystack.

Good job.

[C.J.H.]

Thank you so much. Most of my writing I've kept to myself, until just recently