Crochet of Strange and Unusual Colors

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Some one squeezed out the clouds

like a wash woman's towel

and suddenly 

tears cling to the slick hot cheeks

of Peaches,

baby blue

like the hue of skies choking

back replies 

when it's circulation has been cut off

and green, 

yes green

is the color of leaves 

that refuse to blush in fall, 

the mornings 

are the sound of your name

leaving my lips

when my eyes open, 

repeatedly

like the nickname 

that sticks out of my school girl 

Bobbie shocks

quiet and shooting skyward

 like hissing balloons,

mind thief,

I love you...

the mystery never ends.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

The last three lines do it for me on this piece. I clicked on you at least partially because of your name -- wondering why you were censored ... glad I did.

[Corset]

Thank you Cat

[A. Amos]

Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills

[Corset]

Thank you A. Amos.

[emmajoy]

' Some one squeezed out the clouds ~ like a wash woman's towel ~ and suddenly tears cling to the slick hot cheeks .. ' Can anyone better the idea of falling rain as tears.. ?!

You write pictures and paintings, you do! Read this twice, have a smile on my face because it was like walking though an open-air art exhibition! So many great lines, so many glints of how you see the comings and goings of colour bright moments and love and.. love.

[Corset]

what a beautiful review Emma , Thank You

[Donald Meikle]

It's Monday The perfect day to read this. Well knitted net of mystery.

[Corset]

Why is Monday the perfect day to read this? well, I have to say it came upon a midnight clear, I just wrote it down.

[Corset]

and thank you.

[Donald Meikle]

Monday's washday

[Corset]

oh, I see. Do you remember those old washing machines that used to draw the clothes between two rolling pins and when you watched your grandma use it you thought she'd lose a hand between them, I was scared to death of that thing.

[Donald Meikle]

like it was yesterday. We graduated high school in 55.

[asdarkeyesclose]

'quiet and shooting skyward

like hissing balloons,'

i loved that opening image, clouds can be so poetic, the rain our tears, brilliant concept. the images here fall thick and fast, a great ending as well, nicely abstract. fantastic.

[Corset]

Thank you G.O.D. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

geez, you are good...the line that lydi pointed out really struck me too...your imagery and personification are amazing..

love the mind thief idea...love and nature both mysteries...and who really wants to figure them out...better to just savor them.

love your poetry, Texas.

[Corset]

I'm so glad, thank you Jacob, love your poetry too.

[Baby Ricochet]

I really like this one. Great imagery and metaphors here.

[Corset]

Thank you so much Baby :)

[Lydia Shutter]

"Some one squeezed out the clouds like a wash woman's towel" Brilliant line! So descriptive! Unique and enchanting lines. May the mystery never end if it inspires this sort of poetry! Lydi**

[Corset]

Thank you so much Lydi, I appreciate your visit, it's so nice to see you :)

[Jack...]

This one blew my mind. I love the creativity in your words and approach. This had to have been fun to write because it was so much fun to read. Very cool.

[Corset]

Sami, helped a bit, showed me where the end lines should be, and where I should stop beating myself self up. Thank you so much Jack for stopping in and liking this one.

[Jack...]

It my pleasure...this poem was so very cool.

[Corset]

Thank you so much Jack :)

[Sami Khalil]

"color of leaves that refuse to blush

in fall, the mornings are the sound of

your name leaving my lips

when my eyes open, repeatedly

like the nickname that sticks

out of my school girl Bobbie shocks

quiet and shooting skyward

like hissing ballons,

mind thief,

I love you..."

I leave here with the color of fun, romance and living and acting life to the fullest...Excellent...:)........

[Corset]

I think you are right, the rest is hot air..thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome Muchly...:)......................

[Corset]

Pickle says that- "muchly" :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. We all pick on each other...LOl

[Corset]

boo hissss, lol, "Pick" on each other careful now...I got a feeling she could kick your butt.

[Sami Khalil]

Hahahah...:).....................