Mother dearest

Mother dearest

A Poem by Cosmic kid

Splash
Splash
Splash

Glass after glass
Dizzied mind
Slurred speech

Crash

I'm sorry 
I'm sorry
I'm sorry

All you say as I pick you up and tuck you into bed
I need love
I need to be cared for
I need a chance to be the child
Grow up mother.

© 2012 Cosmic kid


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Unfortunately, there will always be children left to care for reckless parents' mistakes. I think this is very powerful.
I love the tone shift in the last line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

11 Years Ago

Thanks mann
A very good ending to the poem. Mother's do need attention and love too. Thank you for the fun poem to read. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

11 Years Ago

Thank youu
The last line was funny
Almost puts away the serious tone

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cosmic kid

11 Years Ago

yeah i wanted to change up the tone a bit.

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Added on July 6, 2012
Last Updated on July 13, 2012
Tags: Mother, mom, life, alcohol, dizzy, splash, love, I'm sorry

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Cosmic kid
Cosmic kid

Ashland, MA



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