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Laying in the dark

I feel for you

Youre still there

I can see the silhouette of your luminous smile

And you grab me

Hold me close to your body

Where I feel safe

Where I'm not afraid and can't over think

But then you get uncomfortable and let go

Turn your back towards me and fall deep into slumber

I stay still and stare at the ceiling 

Waiting for day to devour the night.

Reviews

[Celestial Witch Child]

It just needs an apostrophe in "you're" in the third line. Aside from that, it's all good.

[kublakhan27]

This has some really nice imagery^^

[ewest1220]

Very sweet! I like it!

[afra]

aww so sweet ....great write

[Lost in Wonderland]

Such a sweet piece, with a touch of sad foreshadowing at the end. Loved the imagery, well done!

[Cosmic kid]

Thank you :)

[Bubbles_94]

Nice, this is really good. I like how it all flows and how, in so little words, I can feel the loneliness in it.

[Cosmic kid]

Thank you :)