Physic vibes

Physic vibes

A Poem by Cosmic kid

I'm a dreamer
Trapped in the woods of a memory I had before I was born
In my past life I wondered through the woods and came across an old rusty water tower
There is no one for miles I stay there.
It is twilight 
I'm in a parking lot there's only one car and a bunch of my friends who I have never met in this life.
It's foggy
There's a saxophone playing.
There's a wood cabin in the woods somewhere and two men are convering 
They wear flannel.
These places are where I belong not here, not now.

© 2012 Cosmic kid


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This poem is awesome! It captures a feeling of confusion as well as hope, and really makes me think. So you're a believer in the past life thing, huh? And you remember it too? That is awesome. I have a memory that never happened too, but that's probably just my insanity acting up again, because I'm me in that non existent memory.

Actually, come to think of it, I have one memory of serving in the military, which is odd because I'm thirteen, and in that memory I am not me... huh.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Cosmic kid

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah I'm going to be going on a big road trip in the near future
Admiral Kirk

11 Years Ago

:D Yeah! Most people I meet just want to settle down, so it's interesting to meet someone I can rela.. read more



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This poem is awesome! It captures a feeling of confusion as well as hope, and really makes me think. So you're a believer in the past life thing, huh? And you remember it too? That is awesome. I have a memory that never happened too, but that's probably just my insanity acting up again, because I'm me in that non existent memory.

Actually, come to think of it, I have one memory of serving in the military, which is odd because I'm thirteen, and in that memory I am not me... huh.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Cosmic kid

11 Years Ago

Haha yeah I'm going to be going on a big road trip in the near future
Admiral Kirk

11 Years Ago

:D Yeah! Most people I meet just want to settle down, so it's interesting to meet someone I can rela.. read more
A very interesting ending to the poem. I did like the beginning. Good to be a dreamer. I like the places you took me in this poem. Sometime dreams are needed for us to keep our sanity. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

11 Years Ago

Thank you and yes I wish I could take others to these places but I'm not sure how to get there :/

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Added on June 28, 2012
Last Updated on July 13, 2012
Tags: Physic, vibes, dream, place, past, water tower, car, cabin, twilight, saxophone

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Cosmic kid
Cosmic kid

Ashland, MA



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