Water

Water

A Poem by Courtney
"

Just a poem where I try to show the differences of water.

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My name is Water

And I am all consuming.

My name is Water

Look below the surface.

 

So beautiful and deep

Terrifying and shallow

Mysterious, inspiring

Deadly and coniving

 

Never ending

forever moving

     over here

                    over there

 

Unpredictable.

 

My name is Water

You know me so well.

My name is Water

Do you know me at all?

© 2012 Courtney


Author's Note

Courtney
Any suggestions on word placement or word changes?

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Water, a Versatile Substance, one in which we are made 3/4 of. This is a wonderful Tribute and I don't think I have seen a more Romanticized piece regarding to this life sustaining substance. Wonderful Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow! I am a softy for people who write about water or eyes... you don't realize how much I appreciate this poem. It's really beautiful, I love how you make the subject what you want it to be... for example, you could have made water sweet and smooth, or dangerous, or mysterious, but you made it everything! Love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Courtney

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
Very good. In the sedond verse, I don't think you need the period after "shallow" ; the words need to run in a continuous line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 15, 2012
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West Lafayette, IN



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