Set Her Free

Set Her Free

A Poem by Melliflower
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If you really love her, set her free

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This was written from the perspective of a girl (myself) who was in an abusive situation where the boy would not let her go. Please, if you're in an unstable relationship with somebody and they want to leave, please take their request with grace. If somebody is meant to be/remain in your life, they will. If not, for every door closed, another opens. But please if somebody wants to leave, don't guilt trip or threaten or mentally abuse somebody into staying. It's an experience i will never forget, and which has tainted my trust forever. 
Lastly, THIS WAS A DRAFT WRITE. I wrote this off the top of my head, stuck an image behind it, and took a screenshot. So i haven't been through and done any editing etc, i just wanted to throw this out there and see what kind of response it got. Thank you for reading!! x 

© 2015 Melliflower


Author's Note

Melliflower
THIS WAS A DRAFT WRITE. I wrote this off the top of my head, stuck an image behind it, and took a screenshot. So i haven't been through and done any editing etc, i just wanted to throw this out there and see what kind of response it got. Thank you for reading! x

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Very genuine and raw indeed. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Melliflower

8 Years Ago

Thank you, i was unsure about keeping this piece posted because i wrote it while caught up in a 'mom.. read more
This is a lovely poem. It has such deep meaning. I saw the little blurb that this was a first draft. The only technical problem I caught was the misspelling of "begun" rather than the correct word "began". Just in case you would have missed it :) I love this so much.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Melliflower

8 Years Ago

Thank you for picking up the mistake, i'll be sure to edit it out if i come back to it at a later da.. read more
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this. ( yeah three loves) This is breath taking and raw. the story telling in its limited length was truly talented and awe inspiring. i find the first drafts are the best, before your brain starts to tare apart the real meaning on the work with logic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Melliflower

8 Years Ago

I think i'll leave this as a draft! Usually with my pieces, i'll leave the draft for a week or two a.. read more

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Added on October 7, 2015
Last Updated on October 7, 2015
Tags: love, autumn, teenage, poetry, prose

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Melliflower
Melliflower

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