stuck.

stuck.

A Poem by Courtney

I can see everyone else around me moving, but I can't. 
I can see everyone else around me breathing, but I can't. 
I watch everyone feel full of life, full of peace. 
I sit in this dark, emotionless room and try to make the walls give me hope.
I sit in this suffocating, caged in room and tell myself I can't do this anymore. 
 I need to get out. But I can't.
I can't move, and I can't breathe. 

© 2017 Courtney



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This was good keep writing

Posted 1 Month Ago


Very relatable. Watching the world move around while you're helplessly standing still.indecision affects us all at certain points in life.not alone

Posted 1 Month Ago


Courtney

1 Month Ago

thank you so much.
Very intense poem. Creation of dARK and bitter times. You are great poet. I hope you are okay.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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One have so many reasons to not do it....
Just find one to do it......
Nicely written.....

Posted 2 Months Ago


So often we feel entrapped by our world... You are not alone in feeling that you cannot escape. The poem expresses well that imprisonment that wants the freedom and gaiety of life outside.

Posted 2 Months Ago



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