Winter Wonderland

I opened the door to a winter wonderland.

The ground looked like it had the skin of a powdered queen.

I ran outside and opened my mouth, sticking out my tongue.

One snow by one snow,

One flake by one flake,

The snowflake dropped into my mouth and I tasted the savoring taste of the snowflake.

I ran to my friends and started an idea.

One snow by one snow,

One ball by one ball,

We formed a snow ball, one large, one medium and one small. 

We laughed and got a new idea,

One snow by one snow,

One man by one man,

We formed a snowman and stuck on it's other accessories.

We fell, our back to the snow and began to giggle.

One snow by one snow,

One angel by one angel,

We spreader our wings,

And pretended to fly.

These were the days of the winter wonderland.

Reviews

[Zoey Dead Girl]

Lots of great description and very vivid. Good work

[Miss Evans]

Very nice.

[chelsea]

A very good poem love the repetition

[Sarah Hime (PokemonFan#..]

Beautiful poem!

I loved it!

KEEP IT UP!

[Wren]

A beautiful write with great imagery. I loved the repetition of one.... by one... :)

[Nima M]

I always wanted to live where it snowed. After reading this, I want to even more so. A lovely write.

["jens books".]

wonderful

[25syd25]

i wont snow now good one

[Popble]

This makes me want it to snow. Very heavily. Too bad that's not likely going to happen for a few seasons. . .

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I experienced many such happy days, as I was growing up. I was always the last one to come in out of the cold. I don't much care for going out in the snow now that I'm older, but it is beautiful.