He Use Too

He Use Too

A Poem by Coyote Song

He use to love me, this he said
Now he wishes I were dead
My heat is broken, I will die
Alone at night all I do is cry
Time will heal all, it doesn't feel that way
I'd rather just sleep through the day
Winter I would die but spring is all new
The love I felt for him is finally through

© 2016 Coyote Song



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Glad that there is a good ending to the failed romance..Good emotive work..Very expressive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Posted 12 Months Ago


A sad yet realistic tale. I agree with Leslie, it has the sound and tone of a country music song. It would be a good one, that's for sure.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like this, this has the character of a country song,
or early Dylan. Good work from an old friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Song

12 Months Ago

Thanks so very much.
The pain of life. One of many. But you were strong enough to out live the pain. A sad but triumphal poem. Very good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written. This is a dark and painful poem about a dark and painful subject. I'm glad it has a happy ending.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Coyote Song
Coyote Song

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I love wild places. I love to write. I love to read all sorts of novels and nonfiction. I love music. I love playing the piano. I love playing the guitar I love to sing. And I love freedom and .. more..

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