He Use Too

He use to love me, this he said
Now he wishes I were dead
My heat is broken, I will die
Alone at night all I do is cry
Time will heal all, it doesn't feel that way
I'd rather just sleep through the day
Winter I would die but spring is all new
The love I felt for him is finally through

Reviews

[K writes]

LOve this write, i can feel this write. so well written

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Glad that there is a good ending to the failed romance..Good emotive work..Very expressive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

[Black Cat Fever]

A sad yet realistic tale. I agree with Leslie, it has the sound and tone of a country music song. It would be a good one, that's for sure.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this, this has the character of a country song,
or early Dylan. Good work from an old friend.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so very much.

[Miss Owl]

The pain of life. One of many. But you were strong enough to out live the pain. A sad but triumphal poem. Very good.

[Tina Kline]

Very well written. This is a dark and painful poem about a dark and painful subject. I'm glad it has a happy ending.