He Use Too

He Use Too

A Poem by Coyote Song

He use to love me, this he said
Now he wishes I were dead
My heat is broken, I will die
Alone at night all I do is cry
Time will heal all, it doesn't feel that way
I'd rather just sleep through the day
Winter I would die but spring is all new
The love I felt for him is finally through

© 2016 Coyote Song



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Glad that there is a good ending to the failed romance..Good emotive work..Very expressive..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Posted 1 Year Ago


A sad yet realistic tale. I agree with Leslie, it has the sound and tone of a country music song. It would be a good one, that's for sure.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like this, this has the character of a country song,
or early Dylan. Good work from an old friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Song

1 Year Ago

Thanks so very much.
The pain of life. One of many. But you were strong enough to out live the pain. A sad but triumphal poem. Very good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written. This is a dark and painful poem about a dark and painful subject. I'm glad it has a happy ending.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Coyote Song
Coyote Song

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I love wild places. I love to write. I love to read all sorts of novels and nonfiction. I love music. I love playing the piano. I love playing the guitar I love to sing. And I love freedom and .. more..

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