Face-To-Face

A song I wrote November 13th 2009

Save Face, Lose Mind

Locked Up, Tight Binds

So Tired, Near Death

Soon to take my last breath

Push hard, Cross Line

Big Bet, Steep fine

 

When you go will I miss you?

Come Again?

Will I miss you?

So rub my face into the dirt

You won't give up until I hurt

So take my soul and shake it

You came to ruin my day

Come Face-To-Face with me

 

Fed Lies, Gulp Fast

My Dreams, Broke Glass

Can't Feel, Can't See

You'll suffer unto me

Chew Dirt, Spit Gold

My Thoughts, So Cold

 

When you go will I miss you?

Come Again?

Will I miss you?

So rub my face into the dirt

You won't give up until I hurt

So take my soul and shake it

You came to ruin my day

Come Face-To-Face with me

 

Black Clouds, Harsh Winds

Blunt Knife, Sharp Pins

Drink Wine, Waste Time

In my eye you squeeze the lime

Mouth Shut, Secrets

Short Life, Regrets

Save Face, Lose Mind

Locked Up, Tight Binds

So Tired, Near Death

Soon to take my last breath

Push hard, Cross Line

Big Bet, Steep fine

Author's Note

Crits?

Reviews

[Sherratt133]

thank you indeed ;) I am that good Miss Orchid ;)

[Corvus]

Just like what BlueOrchid said. It's amazing. Nice scheme, and I love the blunt yet poetic phrasing xP Keep it up!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Criticism? None actually :)

I love the rhyming, I love the structuring of this song... I love this song in general. Didn't thought you were that good XD