To Catch A Cochino

A poem inspired from watching "To Catch A Predator" which makes me sad to watch and feel bad for society. Cochino is the spanish word for nasty.

Uncontrollable Urges
Lead to the perverse
of the mind
that was cursed
with thoughts of lust
and desire

Forbidden Pleasures
from the apple of eden
A delicate fruit
So appealing
Innocence threatened
A hard new lesson

Temptations Unfold
A future destroyed
Demonic Souls
Human Tragedy
A total travesty
Morally Lonely

Reviews

[Bethany Woody]

There have been several cultures in history where it was acceptable practice for young girls, 12-16 yr. olds, to be married to much older men. Even in victorian era england girls were considered women and able to be married as young as 15. Now many of our nations founding members came from the era of this beliefe and routinely practiced said beliefe.

Now there is a ginormous difference between these practices and what you write about.

The piece is dark in it's subject matter and yet there is an appeal in that darkness. On some elemental level we are drawn to the words, weather it be in fear, in anger, or even for a select few in lust and yearning. It is a psychological piece. It touches a person's mind, makes them think and even has the ability to frighten.

Great job!

Beth

P.S.- I recomend this piece for the contest Child Abuse.
Child abuse

[Ama May Cooper]

A piece with so many differnt meanings. Well worded presentened and read

[Voice]

Griping write which can be taken in many ways. I truly love the way you worded it and made it flow. Just brilliant!!!

Voice

[Victoria Harlequin]

Strong words. Great write, keep it up.

[Stephanie]

Once again the power of your words has blown me away. I had to read it twice to grasp the concept. (Or at least to think I grasped the correct concept.) Lust and desire for younger girls when these guys are like forty or something is perverse as you say. Eye opener for sure.

[Gandré]

the predator is looking for special relationships in which the predator is aware that the prey is aware of his being predator and vice versa the victim would seem to qualify as a social relationship by his criteria, often he is building a 'cage' and even that 'golden cage' when the victim is surrounded with 'gifts' is something what has been offered by him and chosen by the prey, often the prey is under legal age or and being neglected by her/his environment. great poem, I liked a lot.

[bluessadmood]

wonderful write my friend ..
as i see it we all have secret desires ,fantasies to the very wild,we always harbor inside some really nasty needs
and we just think about it inside our minds,that lovely machine ,i do not know why it occurs to him,our mind,
such thoughts ..could it be a sick mind ,a juvenile ,dirty mind..i really dont think so,its just natural..
only these needs and desires may not fit to this world at this moment of time or this place ,i think he may goes far into
future where all these things we may call nasty and dirty will one day be very acceptable..thats the only explanation i have,and so
at one time we have to suppress its calls ,shut them down,like saying ,no this is never the time..
or else if we just let go for him to do as he likes ,we will look like animals ,and the world will be
such a chaos ..i really enjoy all your works ..
lovely write..