Writerscafe Pimps

Writerscafe Pimps
Use the Net to get ladies
with their crap poems

No substance at all
Clearly trying an angle
The real world scares them

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh.. I found this one really funny.. I'm sure they're out there like in the real world.. it doesn't bother me.. lol.. they don't hurt anyone.. just amuse us.. found this one truly hilarious! Pimping.. lol.. in writing.. I'm sure there's lady pimps as well as the male ones too.. lol.. I'm seriously laughing on this one.. thank you! =)

[Laura Maidah]

Maybe a full halt before the last line? So we can really distinguish the climactic element of the finale. let me get one thing out of the way: I think punctuation is effective in bringing out tone, mood, structure, and overall poetic coherence. I understand some poets prefer not to use any punctuation, and some poets are really good at it, but before you eschew it completely, I think you should at least practice it. It might be effective to play with punctuation and understand it's purpose and what you can do with it. I know it's short though, so your call.

[Soul Magic✯]

*LOL* hilarious, creative and truth all in one. you are so amazing with the ink... very well written :)

[Gandré]

ha ha ha everybody is waiting for an opportunity. that's what the universe wants us to do.
I mean....the ladies get trapped, right? but that's their choice, again.

I had to come and re-read. Hope you are fine and thanks for stepping by and read my Harmony poem.
Yes, I found harmony, how did you know?

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Vry good this one is not the usual fare.. but I found it amusing ..I think those guys are found everywhere .

[Rune---a Novel]

Writers sites are what they are, mostly amateurs, if they were really much good they wouldn't be hanging out on the net would they? They'd be working.

[Sarah Buchanan]

Yes and there are the ones that attack the substance rather than the skill. Those are the ones that really annoy me. My b/f considered some people on here egotistical, trying to get praise to make themselves feel better. This kind of reminded me of that so I shared it with him too. Great write, I always tend to like your poems though. :)

[N]

Hahaha! This was very funny, and true.
And, I love that it was a haiku.
Great job!!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

lol, ain't that the truth??? I love this piece, great job!!!

Heather

[Constance L. Hartwell]

ooooooo you know you are right! Those 6 lines spoke the truth. To be blunt, I'm sooo sick of people in the cafe writing crap hoping they can get a freaking date. It sucks because you can't just tell someone their words aren't poetry because poetry (and art in general) is subjective! It pisses me off but what can you do? That's the funny thing about this game.