Fix You

When your heart reaches out to a broken soul, and it's only instinct is to mend.

Like a new ball of clay, just made,

I see you start to crack,

I see your color start to fade,

and I need to bring you back.

 

I need to fix you,

make you better than before,

with open arms there is nothing I wouldn't do,

I need to make you even more.

 

Like a new ball of clay, just made,

I use my thumb to smooth the cracks,

although the color still will fade,

I will always love you back.

 

Author's Note

I love poetry and the emotion that goes into a short number of words, making us realize dreams that had never before existed, and putting hope back into out hearts.

Reviews

[zainul]

Focused my attention on while reading the poem.
I found it very sweet,special and meaningful.
When read second time,my attention went to its rhyming.
Wow,it was amazing.
I love your golden piece that plays with a lump of clay to make a structure of your passion.

[A. Amos]

I like the title same as Cold play song:) I truly enjoyed your read...great work my friend

[Sami Khalil]

I like the poem and the analogy you have used...Splendid...:)

[Brenden Taylor]

I like the consistent imagery with the clay, and I especially like the action in the tenth line - using the thumb to smooth out the cracks. Overall, very nice.