Beautiful

You think you're ugly
I think you're wrong

You say that I'm funny
Now that is dead on

You're super sweet
Anyone would agree

You need more self esteem
And that I can see

So I just wanted to say
That you're beautiful

No matter what you say or do
I know you can't deny it

And I do promise that my word is truth
Why would I ever lie to you

So please
Oh please believe

When I say
That you are beautiful

More beautiful than me
Oh honey you are beautiful

And every time I see your words
I feel like God is communicating to me

And every night before I go to sleep
Our conversations bounce around my head

And all I really want to do is speak
I'd go on and on until the end

So when I ask you to believe
Oh pretty pretty please say yes

Because you think you're a bit too dorky
But that's wonderful

You say that I am pretty
I won't deny that though xD

You're the kindest guy I've ever met before
And I've met a lot

Your confidence could use some work
Mine could too you know

But I really wanted to say
And I really needed to say
I just really had to say
That you're beautiful
Today

Author's Note

To one of my very close friends who is truly very beautiful.

Reviews

[Katie]

I love this poem a lot your work makes me smile a lot. The way you write is awesome !:)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, my friend! :)

[DoormanDan]

The lines you started the poem off with couldn't be more perfect than they are now. Overall, I'd say this is one of your most uplifting poems, and it delivers a very powerful message that really needs to be shared with the whole world! That friend of yours should be thanking the stars for having a great friend like you! :)

[Cool Girl]

Hahahaha, thanks! You always have the right thing to say that will always make me smile:)

[Chain of Hearts]

Awwwwe...! I loved it, so sentimental and just plain lovely!
Awesome!
-LK

[Cool Girl]

Awwwe...thanks! xD

[1Disawsum]

I love the flowiness to this poem, as well as your others! But this poem really spoke a lot, and showcased the stark reality of humans, of any and all ages, sexuality, race, and nationality etc. all at a time, have low self esteem and confidence. Anyway, I also LOVED the repetition of the last stanza, it begs to be heard of. Loved it xxx and as usual, keep it up! You're really good :) xxx

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much! That is so kind of you to say:)

[Gee]

What a Beautiful poem to write for your friend

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!

[Gee]

You're welcome

[willweb]

This was as beautiful as you find your friend and he finds you. What a nice uplifting poem. This should improve his self esteem I would think. :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thank you, Will!

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ow ! this is really a lovely one ! .. with such a beautiful rhythm u wrote '' Beautiful''
I can't help but say it's really very ''Beautiful'' ; )
I think both of the friends are lucky here to have a ''Beautiful'' eachother! : )

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks!

[ANTO]

This is such a supportive message of love in the purest sense. You are lucky to have each other. Keep tending that flame of friendship for it will warm you both when you need it to.
This is straight from the heart Cool Girl - its like you're here talking to them and we are ghostly spectators - I wont say voyeurs and sully this write.
Good piece CG

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, ANTO! It means a lot coming from you:)

[Rene Salinas]

We can all see different thing in from Life. I think that's where th famous lines "having the eyes to see" may be coming from in terms of point of view. I think you are seeing the radiant side of tha someone that maybe does not have enough self - esteem. Or that conciously is also not interested in valuing him. However your feelings seem to make up for the both you.

"If only the eyes to see " we all had.

Thank You.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much for the review, Rene:)

[Stephen]

I loved this poem. I am all about bringing out and helping others to see the beauty that lies within them.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! I like helping others too:)