Something Random

I feel..delirious.
I feel..sad.
I don't know..what I am doing.

One more drink,
One more sip..
Will clear my head.

Cry,
Drink,
Cry,
Drink

Is this the new me?

Cry,
Drink,
Cry,
Drink

Get drunk,
Then fall asleep.

Author's Note

I've never gotten drunk

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

You express well the destitution that drives some to search for solace in a bottle. I've known many like that, and one of them was me. You drink because you have a problem, and before you know it, your worst problem of all is the alcohol. Nice writing, Cool Girl.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I have friends who drink...it's sad.

[Lizardo]

It's really something I didn't expect Aless. But you describ everything like you have drink (great acting, you would be a great Dialogue writer!) It really expresses that thoughts of someone who is losing everything and that just wants everything to move on but yet, he or she wants to hold on to everything becuase he or she is too afraid of moving forward, what might await ahead? could it be worst than right now? .
Always remember that Drinking is not worth it like IM said down there, SO NEVER DO IT. I like the poem, I could feel the pain and sadness all through the poem and I could picture it right in my head too.
I like the poem, its something new from you Aless. Great write.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so very much! I appreciate your time and kindness :)

[Lizardo]

youre welcome :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Trust me...don't ever get drunk. Its really REALLY not gonna do any good. I know from my own experience....and after lookin at what alcohol left of my so called father... Anyhow, the poem is really well done.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! I wont! I promise :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Any time :)

[ANTO]

We cant wait to grow up and taste everything the world has to offer adults who we envy for years - starting from recognising the difference that adulthood is special because bedtime is much much later lol. But we might adopt a quick way to look/feel adult, smoking, drinking experimenting with drugs and sex and lose ourselves completely. I think you nailed a soul trying to grow up too quick here CG.
Great write my friend.
:)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much, Anto! I always love reading your reviews! It's been a while, my dear friend :)

[ANTO]

YVW my friend. It has been a while. I'm glad to see and read you again CG. :)))

[Cool Girl]

Aww thanks, ANTO :)

[closed]

wow i thought this was literal...

until i saw the author's note

i know you well enough to know you're not a drinker...
at least i hope i do...

creative though

-Dream

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I don't drink or party or anything like that :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

good that........drinking never solved anything.......permanently........
depressing write......but creative expression......
i liked it!!
:)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!!