Giving Up Love

Giving Up Love

A Poem by Cool Girl
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A sad song about two people parting because they can't satisfy each other's needs..

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I'm in love with you..

Don't you hate knowing that you love him and he loves you too.

But you can't give each other what you need,

And your heart's about to bleed.

No more sound..

Silent room,

Torn up sheets upon the ground.

You wanted to play hide and seek..

You the finder,
Me the hider,

But I hid to well..
And protected myself.

I gave you the key
To my heart
To my soul,

But that isn't what you need

You needed comfort,
Needed pleasure,
Don't you see?

I wanted sweetness,
Wanted kindness,
Not sexual desire.

I wish to hug you
And place kisses on your head,

But that leads to other things, I'd rather skip instead.

You are my world,
You are my life,
Come hear my plea.

Darling I'm in love with you and you love me.

I don't want to ever have to let you go.

You're my sweetheart,
You're my angel,
Don't you know?

But I'm incapable of giving what you need.
I just wish it didn't have to be this way

Because I'm begging now,
I'm begging on my knees.

Why can't God just make this easier for me?

Because I'm in love!

And I'm crying
Yes, I'm crying

I need you..

Won't you say,
oh won't you say you need me too

I think I'm dying here inside,
And we all know why.

Because we're parting,
Now it's time to say goodbye..

© 2015 Cool Girl


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Author's Note

Cool Girl
This isn't true..I just wrote it..

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so sad and heartwrenching... but so good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is good :) Shows affection in sadness and desire. Definitely sadness though lol The party wants to make it work, but sadly doesn't. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks very much :)
"you are my world,
You are my life,
Come hear my plea.

Darling I'm in love with you and you love me.

I don't want to ever have to let you go."

This can be a sad song. Thank you for sharing...:)...................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Nothing is more beautiful and awakening than love, and nothing is more painful and aching as when love leaves us alone. This is so heartfelt. Truly thankful this isn't true for you. xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

That is very very true. Thank you for stopping by!
Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

So glad I caught you. Will be sad if you're gone. xo
This one is sad, well written. I can feel the feels in it. As for love...sexual desires are not love... Love does not necererly have to end up in sex... Nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

We can partly blame it on the media...the movies identifying love with sex... Aint good. But i do kn.. read more
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Yes :) :) :)
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

:-) :-) :-) :-) lol
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jb
Nice poetry for the imagination:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
jb

8 Years Ago

Your welcome:)
I like the placing of the lines and stanzas, I think it creates more tension. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!!!!
Awesome write cool girl! It's been forever since I've got a RR from you and I'm glad you sent it. I loved it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Aaron! Thanks for reading!! Take care :)
A emotional ride in the poetry. You create need and desperation. I like the flow of thoughts that led to the sad ending. No ending is a good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'll see you around :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
beautiful. You captured the emotions perfectly, it makes me reflect.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much

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