Time - A Priceless Commodity

Time - A Priceless Commodity

A Poem by Praveeta

Time - A Priceless Commodity

Time is ticking
So much to learn
So much to share
So much to achieve

© 2014 Praveeta



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This poem is a good one, and it so very true. In the small limit of time, we as a human being, are allotted- we have so many things to do. We must learn from the things we do and see, share the lessons that we have learned. We have to achieve so many things- whether major or minor. This poem is an excellent view point on this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your insightful review. I highly appreciate it.



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Short and to the point. And all of it absolutely true. We have very little time on this Earth to share with others, we need to use it wisely.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

So true. Thanks for reading my poem.
Time is invaluable and it stays. We evaporate soon enough ! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

So true. Thanks for your time and comment.
haha.... loved it!!! sweet, short buy deep!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review.
And the older you get the faster that timepiece ticks.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and comment.
I just love the way you write the tiny little cute things....
Ahena :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ahena MK

3 Years Ago

They are great story starters
Ahena
Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you Ahena.
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Bri
Explains life perfectly and the essence of time.
Well done, friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and review.
Interesting ... when time is limitless, you have witten a short poem e4ncompassing it all ..3well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment.
This is one of my favourites! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it.
Short, simple, yet Philosophical, good write :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the inspiration. :)
POETIC SOUL 2013

3 Years Ago

I inspired this? I am flattered.
Praveeta

3 Years Ago

As in keep writing :)
very good, it was better not to mention ''time'' in the starting, in order to keep the mysticism .
sayed

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review and suggestion.
SAYED THANGAL

3 Years Ago

my ''unseen controller'' is also about time.

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Added on January 1, 2014
Last Updated on January 1, 2014
Tags: Time, Priceless, Achieve, Learn, Share

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Praveeta
Praveeta

Australia



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