Fiery ball

Fiery ball

A Poem by Praveeta


Soaring summer heat

Sweat dribbling down forehead

Blood hits boiling point

© 2014 Praveeta



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I would be glad to see the sun. Here in Michigan maybe 11 inches of snow. I prefer cold over heat. Can't escape the heat. Warm clothing keep you safe from the cold. Very good use of words. Create a good vision with the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely feedback.



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Nice imagery. The summers here seem exactly like this poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and comment.
Exactly how it felt last summer around here. ^-^

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading my piece.
Brittany Zedalis

3 Years Ago

You are welcome
Nice in its conciseness. I enjoyed the read.
That's what many of us is waiting...it's a chilling month now.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your invaluable time and review. I appreciate it. Sun has been smiling quite gene.. read more
Nice haiku it makes you warm and cozy and the steams you to the core.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your invaluable feedback.
POETIC SOUL 2013

3 Years Ago

No problem.
Very truly a wonderful poem! I've most of your pieces and I sense a deep current of hidden undertones and emotional innuendo. There is much more going on here than meets the eye and readers would do well to read your work more than once. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your insightful review. I highly appreciate it.
This warmed me up...send some of that heat this way will ya Praveeta...well done, no pun intended! ;-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Certainly, we have more than enough. Thank you for your lovely words.
Frieda P

3 Years Ago

Brrr, it's cold here, thanks! And my pleasure.
This is a superb description of a heat wave. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review, dear friend.
Arialti

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome! :)
By what I've heard, this pretty much describes Australia in huge sections of the country.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Yes, you are right. :)
the fiery ball is the sun, right? I agree with the poem, heat is sometimes uncomfortable. I like ur work in genealogy. Short simple stuff that conveys a lot.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Khushi

3 Years Ago

I mean general
Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Yes, sun is the fiery ball. Thanks for your lovely feedback.
Excellent use of sensory. Reminds me of the heat of Fresno XD. Well done :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely comment.
Mashairi

3 Years Ago

Absolutely welcome :D

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Added on January 5, 2014
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Tags: Summer, heat, blood, fiery, soaring

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Praveeta

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