Surreal

Surreal

Sculptured by my thoughts
Enlivened by my feelings
The person of my dreams
You are standing

Reviews

[kumars]

nice poem nice written. nice thought and indeed nice calling form you.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your kind review. I appreciate it.

[Frieda P]

Oh if it was only that easy, luverly surreal sentiments here Praeeta!

[Praveeta]

Yes, I agree with you. Thanks for your review.

[Avinash]

A beautiful ode to the love of life. Does not matter if that person really exists in life or not . Having this beautiful vision is good enough .

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your lovely review, Avinash. I appreciate it.

[Catherine Frain]

I feel as if this poem *could* be better, but that is my opinion. I did not understand that poem at all, and rereading the poem did not help at all. I like the idea that is behind it, but I can understand what it actually means as the wording confused me, hence hiding the meaning of the entire poem. If the poem were to be clearer, I would reread it then and be able to give you a more thoughtful review about the poem. But now I can not understand so I am unable to do so.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and opinion.

[Scott Mou]

short and sweet, keep up the good work

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely review.

[Sue Hart]

Be still my heart. How very romantic. You have spoken like one who needs few words to say great things.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your amazing review.

[Sue Hart]

You deserve it. Put me on your reading list.

[Kami Grace]

The words are used very beautifully, and the theme is shown vividly in a short poem. I am really astonished! :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for amazing review.

[Khushi]

Imagination has no limits. The person of your imagination, a very nice topic to write about.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your lovely comment.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, a complex and telling piece.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and review, Thomas. I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. When the dreams come dream. Life can be good. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely review, Coyote. I appreciate it.