I do

I do

Dressed in white gown
Embellished with sequins
She walks down the aisle

Bouquet in her hand
She reaches the groom
Her appearance like a goddess

Union of two souls
Is witnessed at the altar
In cosmic presence

Author's Note

A poem for my best friend. Looking forward to your wedding.

Reviews

[F.Gentil]

I once had a vision, not seeing in a dream, but basically an hallucination in which I married myself. Quite strange I must say, but unearthly beautiful. This poem reminds me of that. It takes me to the spiritual realm where what I perceived as reality was magnificent and divine. I could feel the cosmos auras around my body, for in it I was an embodiment of God. I was a part of that cosmos. It makes me wonder if when two souls get married in our world, if this embodiment is the true emotional state felt.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and insightful review. I highly appreciate it.

[prodicallife]

Dear Praveeta,

You are awesome with your expressions. I would not say great usage of words this time rather I should compliment the words with expressions.

You use great expressions with your writings.

Thanks for sharing.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your invaluable feedback. I highly appreciate it.

[prodicallife]

You are welcome :)

[paras]

nicely expressed.!! a beautiful work :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and amazing review.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the true ornaments for the wedding couples

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading and for your comment. I appreciate it.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is beautiful. I frequently write about my wedding. It is such a happy experience.

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for the lovely review.

[Raymond Federle]

Very nice. Beautifully written! :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the lovely feedback.

[one sky]

Wow! This makes me reminisce of a great union from the past.
This is simple but sweet.
Thanks for the share and best wishes to your friend!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review. I appreciate it.

[one sky]

You're welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a gorgeous picture you have painted with your words.Well penned Praveeta:)

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my piece. I appreciate it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of a wedding. Wedding are good days. When two people become one. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate it.

[Ahena MK]

good read!!! wonderfully penned

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it.

[Sami Khalil]

Congratulations on our behalf for her. May your day be next...A beautiful poem and sentiments...:)........

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your lovely review. I hope so. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............