Summer Blessing

Summer Blessing

A Poem by Praveeta

Rain pelts in summer
The dams cannot handle
Roots drink in solace

© 2014 Praveeta



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Praveeta
Heavy downpour since yesterday. Inspired by mother nature.

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Rain has made us inconvenient to move around, while in the nature, rain is just like a blessing to all lives, which is shown very beautifully by the words 'roots drink in solace'. Brief yet all these simple words had reflected exactly what mother nature has given us. Very beautiful poem, Praveeta! :)

Kami

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely review.



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I really like the short, terse words pelts, dams, and roots. It really creates a strong image.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and review. I appreciate it.
A lovely and concise write on the rain as a blessing from summer. I like the images of "roots drinking in solace" as it is a very soothing line that give us a picture of nature's cycle itself.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading my piece and reviewing it.
Beautiful write! I absolutely love the rain. In my opinion, it is peaceful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading my haiku and for the lovely review. I appreciate it.
Moon

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome
Water: The elixir of life, many forms it has and we have to flow along with it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

So true. Thanks for reading my haiku.
May we all be less like dams and more like roots.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely interpretation.
Reading this made me long for summer and those beautiful rainy nights...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and comment :)
Robert Strzalko

3 Years Ago

You're welcome...
Release of excess waters from the dams flood so many places in India every year, yet the rain is so crucial for us. Mother nature always surprises us with her endless capability.
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Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and comment.
Anand Sehgal

3 Years Ago

pleasure is mine, Dear :)
Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
"Rain pelts in summer
The dams cannot handle
Roots drink in solace"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your second visit. I appreciate it.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

M pleasure...Any time...:).....................
Rain has made us inconvenient to move around, while in the nature, rain is just like a blessing to all lives, which is shown very beautifully by the words 'roots drink in solace'. Brief yet all these simple words had reflected exactly what mother nature has given us. Very beautiful poem, Praveeta! :)

Kami

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely review.

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Added on January 23, 2014
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