Summer Blessing

Summer Blessing

A Poem by Praveeta

Rain pelts in summer
The dams cannot handle
Roots drink in solace

© 2014 Praveeta


Author's Note

Praveeta
Heavy downpour since yesterday. Inspired by mother nature.

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Rain has made us inconvenient to move around, while in the nature, rain is just like a blessing to all lives, which is shown very beautifully by the words 'roots drink in solace'. Brief yet all these simple words had reflected exactly what mother nature has given us. Very beautiful poem, Praveeta! :)

Kami

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely review.



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Nice Haiku. Excellent work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review. I am glad you liked the haiku.
i liked the poem...wish it was more...becoz we never get tired of reading about the mother nature....good poem..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and reviewing my piece.
well its a brief yet a beautiful poem you have described an entire scenery here.!! isn't mother nature the great artist herself ? :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and lovely review.
Beautiful! The poem is extremely brief yet I was oddly captured in the mother nature aspect of loving it and hating it, rereading the piece understanding how profound, interesting and beautiful the words are within the poem! Thank you so much for requesting me your writing! Request me more please!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading my piece and for the lovely review.
It's very good……………………………………………………….LIKE IT VERY MUCH! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and cute review.
Isn't it a blessing when you feel those drops into your skin which experience the heat of the sun for some months?
Nice Haiku.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Yes, it was a blessing and I enjoyed every moment while being outside. Thanks a lot for your invalua.. read more
Nature is truly harsh sometimes but other times more beautiful than words. Glad that you are inspired by nature and you stay inspired for as long as it takes to make a difference.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and comment.
Hi Praveeta,you have presented various aspects of rain in your succinct piece.
Keep up the good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your invaluable time and lovely review, dear friend.
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are always welcome,dear friend.:)
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Its really good, as always. U have again managed to say so much by writing only three lines!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for awesome review.
Short and lovely. I love the imagery here :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely review.
Shaquana Adams

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)

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Added on January 23, 2014
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Tags: Summer, rain, drink, solace

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