Summer Blessing

Rain pelts in summer
The dams cannot handle
Roots drink in solace

Author's Note

Heavy downpour since yesterday. Inspired by mother nature.

Reviews

[Kami Grace]

Rain has made us inconvenient to move around, while in the nature, rain is just like a blessing to all lives, which is shown very beautifully by the words 'roots drink in solace'. Brief yet all these simple words had reflected exactly what mother nature has given us. Very beautiful poem, Praveeta! :)

Kami

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the lovely review.

[Avinash]

This one wants you to be simply become a part of nature,,,..which has more fundamental needs than human beings.

[Praveeta]

I agree. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Here in Michigan. Winter is here. I like the poem. Showed me nice visions I'm missing. I hope the dams hold strong. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and invaluable feedback. I highly appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Frieda P]

Mother nature is always a grand inspiration, this one warmed my heart, especially since it's been so frigid here lately, a welcome blush of warmth on your page Praveeta.

[Praveeta]

I am glad you liked my piece. Thanks for your valuable time and review.

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was mine, now if you could just send me some of that sunshine. :-)

[Praveeta]

Thank you. Feel free to land on my page for warmth or you could fly to Australia to steal some sunshine :)

[Frieda P]

I'd like to do both! :-)

[Praveeta]

Sweet :) four months (excluding Jan) before winter strikes here.