Fighting Temptations

Fighting Temptations

A Poem by Praveeta

Decadent desserts on display
Creamy Chocolate Mousse
Classic Creme Brulee
Sumptuous Strawberry Trifle
Tempting Tiramisu
The presentation so inviting
Almost giving in I walk away

© 2014 Praveeta



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Good food is my weakness. A delicious treat like in the artwork would steal my hunger and I would be done. Somethings we need to keep a distance from. Hard to fight the desire of sweet and tasty foods. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading my piece and for sharing your thoughts.


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Being diabetic I see this temptation every day I must stay away from sweets and other harmful foods that are not good for me too. But Fruits and veggie pull me through But every once in a while I give in to Temptations and evil sweet sins.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love poems about food. Glad you were able to walk away because if that were me there would be only a plate left. Nice poem :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review.
Food for thought. How very delicious! Thanks for the nice read. I could feel the Tiramisu melting in my mouth. =)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your time and review. Glad you enjoyed.
Devesh

3 Years Ago

You're welcome. =)
Mouthwatering! I admire your self-control. If I had been there, I wouldn't give them a second thought.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and comment. I appreciate it.
Dear Praveeta,

It is so tempting.

I am so much filled with the flavors of those delicious treats. It is really a great piece from your end.

Thanks for sharing

Stay blessed
Prodical

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback. I highly appreciate it.
prodicallife

3 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Mmm this poem is so finger licking good :) Great job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.
Tasty write :) mouth-watering in fact :)
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review.
Haha oh how i can relate to this piece. You made me hungry.

Very enjoyable piece!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading my piece and for the lovely review. Sorry, I did not intend to make you hungry :).. read more
Sweet treats... delicious write

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and lovely review.
Good food is my weakness. A delicious treat like in the artwork would steal my hunger and I would be done. Somethings we need to keep a distance from. Hard to fight the desire of sweet and tasty foods. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading my piece and for sharing your thoughts.

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