Fighting Temptations

Decadent desserts on display
Creamy Chocolate Mousse
Classic Creme Brulee
Sumptuous Strawberry Trifle
Tempting Tiramisu
The presentation so inviting
Almost giving in I walk away

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good food is my weakness. A delicious treat like in the artwork would steal my hunger and I would be done. Somethings we need to keep a distance from. Hard to fight the desire of sweet and tasty foods. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece and for sharing your thoughts.

[paras]

such a true story. The need of taste , the satisfaction of human desires is so distracting :p great work :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and interpretation.

[kublakhan27]

I think we can all relate to this...well done :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and feedback.

[SAYED THANGAL]

a thought provoking piece, very good

[Praveeta]

Thanks Sayed.

[Ahena MK]

That's just amazing ...... Real good

[Praveeta]

Thanks Ahena.

[Khushi]

Stuff which I can relate too. Thanks for sharing!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading. I am glad you could relate.

[Linda alexander]

Great write, this can relate to sweet tooth, also it can be related to temptations in life like money, positions, authority etc, really enjoyed, strawberry striffle, may be I can not escape from that

[Praveeta]

Yes, this relates to any temptations where will is tested. You will have to share Strawberry trifle with dear friend Frieda :)

[Linda alexander]

You can not call me Frieda, Praveeta, I am Linda sweetie

[Praveeta]

Sorry, I did not call you Frieda but I stated that you have to ask dear friend Frieda to share Strawberry Trifle. :)

[Linda alexander]

Sorry, I misunderstood, I will definitely when I see her with her fabulous writing

[Praveeta]

No problems Linda sweetie.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I'm not too much of a sweet tooth...
or desserts for that matter...
but I can see how this can entice....
those that are into all of the above mentioned...
I keep my diet simple and lots of veggies...
thanks for the invite...
good day...

Author&friend

Glen Yumang Manese

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece.

[Linda alexander]

Take care........

[Sami Khalil]

You must have a strong will to fight strong urging's and temptations...Temptations can be a test too...Bravo on this wonderful poem...:)..............

[Praveeta]

It is an ongoing battle. Thanks Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome...:0.......................

[Frieda P]

Okay I'll be the weakling here, I'm digging into the Tiramisu, and perhaps the Strawberry Trifle too, scrumptious poem Praveeta!

[Praveeta]

All yours :) think of it as free day. Thanks for reading my poem.

[Frieda P]

Ha sounds good to moi, what is temptation for after all? ;-) My pleasure.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yes girl they do so tempt us but be strong and walk away lol.Nice poem :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and review dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)